The World Is Controled: 10 Words

Protest the World,
and Rescue it
from it`s own suicide.

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This world isn't by the people, or even for the people. It is controlled by 'persons' who produce every aspect of the world. Every war ever started, was staged on false pretenses. All religion is fake, only formed as a way to 'control' the people. Natural Disasters are all faked to scare the people into a false reality.

Don't Want to offend anyone, if you believe in any religion, or are a war hero, or victim to natural disaster. Just want to write a story.

Supposed to be a pic, but tools don`t work worth a... well, you get my drift.

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  • trekkergirl
    August 3, 2008
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    deep

  • sassykitty
    May 29, 2008

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    nice use of personification and i like the way the brevity captures your strength of feeling - great write and just shows sometimes you don't need too many words to say what you have to say.


  • WhatALovelyDay
    May 26, 2008

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    that is very, very interesting. Comletely intriguing- I loved it. Great job


  • DreamerDragon
    May 25, 2008

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    I never really thought of the world that way. Maybe it's true. I'm not sure. But the whole religion thing can't be as a way to control people because their's no seen leader that makes orders or anything. Unless your talking about the Resident Evil 4 religion (lol) Very good way to describe your view of the world.


  • asthray.heart
    May 15, 2008

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    Were killing the world. What a dark way to say it. Haha.

    tnks for entering and goodluck.

    ebunni


  • NinjaMegami
    May 15, 2008
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    ..........


  • NinjaMegami
    May 15, 2008

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    mmmmm.....

    well! that picture is SOMETHIN'!!!!! And that was intresting short, short, story!

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