Death

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mmmmm......don't ask me what "words a song" means. i just thought it sounded cool. ( there IS a hidden meaning, though. )

A contest entry

• Numbers. by asthray.heart. 1000 points, ended May 21, 2008, 24 entries
  • next story in this contest, remove from contest

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  trekkergirl
  August 3, 2008
  
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  question what happens when the lights go out? Hummmm... maybe Idon't need to know. Imagination is always good
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  WhatALovelyDay
  May 26, 2008
  
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  oooo. Mysterious. I can't say I know what it means, but it defiantely siounds good

  
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    NinjaMegami
    May 27, 2008
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    thank you!!!!!!!!!!
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  loyda
  May 15, 2008
  
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  i liked this very, very much!
  the picture fits the story perfectly, and you did a great job prettying the page up.
  
  i know i shouldn't, but sometimes the cover of a book (or the page of the story) does matter, for sometimes they are so horrid it makes you NOT want to read it.
  
  but let me not rant on appearances. let me give you my honest opinion of this little piece.
  
  i think that being in darkness is not very original, 'cause if you see, most of the things here are dark and...uh...black.
  
  but you put it very nicely, and i don't think 'words a song' was ackward AT ALL *glances at the comment below her*
  
  i think it was great!
  3 cheery thingies for you!

  
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    NinjaMegami
    May 19, 2008
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    phew!

    thank you SO much! i just like that line! it can mean many things.....thanks for the great comment! I you!!!
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  asthray.heart
  May 15, 2008
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  Words a song.. puts me off. Awkward.
  
  tnks for entering and goodluck.
  
  ebunni
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    NinjaMegami
    May 19, 2008
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    uh?

    " puts me off. " what do you mean by that??
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  LadyLionnir
  May 15, 2008
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  It sounds like a quick romance, but I love it. Beautiful. Good luck in the contest!
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    NinjaMegami
    May 19, 2008
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    wow!

    thank you so much! ( it sounds like a quick romance?? )
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  kierancluchey
  May 15, 2008
  
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  Yes, original. I can`t quite think of the hidden meaning... Possibly, it doesn`t take long for someone to say something beautiful like a song, before the light goes out. Meaning something ending... idk
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    NinjaMegami
    May 15, 2008
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    oh.....

    your hidden meaning is much sweeter than mine. you guys are smart!!!!!
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      kierancluchey
      May 15, 2008
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      Guys?... lol?
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        NinjaMegami
        May 15, 2008
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        you.....

        you people @ SW!!!!!!!!!!
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          kierancluchey
          May 15, 2008
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          OH

          Oh...
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  NinjaMegami
  May 15, 2008
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  .....