Hiding from the enemy

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It was nice, they were hiding from the enemy..Their parents. Her's said the boy was trouble for he wore black, had tattoos, had long black hair, and had piercings. However, She saw him as teh sweetest and best guy she knew. His said she was teh worst, she had many colors in her hair and she was failing out of school. He knew different for she was smart, beautiful, and was only failing because of her parents. Both of tehir parents thought the kids were dumb, as well as both were getting kicked out in one month. 'You have a month to get the hell out." Both heard those words today. Both ran away, ran and found eachother. They are alone, on their own, with nothing, not even jobs. What now? They ran to a friend's house, now here they are, hiding from the enemy.2

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(This is a story I wrote for a thing called "dreamcetcher" for my highschool )6

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  • Jaffa-
    May 15, 2008

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    woo!

    That was really cool.
    I want to read more so much.
    You got me interested in like the first sentence.
    I actually NEED to read more now. xo

    • just-alittle-emo
      May 15, 2008
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      Well

      I'm about to type up another I have written..though it's terribly different from the above thanks for reading