untittled -Chapter 1

"Hello? is there anyone there?" i ask in a quiet voice.1

I walk in through the main doors, partly drenched from the rain outside. Just a small child, 7yrs old, with pale skin & black hair, my black eyes appear as if to glow. tucking my wings into my cloak, i walk down the hall.2

"is there anyone home? I'm lost.. I'm looking for a safe place to stay..."3

my little wolf cub snuggles in the bag hidden in my cloak. he notices the smell of other wolves & starts to whimper. "hush fang, be quiet." quickly i find an empty bed room on the second floor. Looking through the wardrobe i find a cotton servants outfit. After drying off i put it on.4

I let Fang out of his bag, he curls up on an old dusty bed. I walk over to the fire place & grab a log from a small box. taking a deep breath, i sprinkle some dust from a pouch around my neck over the log. "bright light, warm light, fire bright please light." I whisper & a flame bursts to life. 5

"this shall do for tonight, in the morning we'll look around. good night fang"

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