untittled -Chapter 1

"Hello? is there anyone there?" i ask in a quiet voice.1

I walk in through the main doors, partly drenched from the rain outside. Just a young woman, 18yrs old, with pale skin & black hair, my black eyes appear as if to glow. tucking my wings into my cloak, i walk down the hall.2

"is there anyone home? I'm lost.. I'm looking for a safe place to stay..."3

my little wolf cub snuggles in the bag hidden in my cloak. he notices the smell of other wolves & starts to whimper. "hush fang, be quiet." quickly i find an empty bed room on the second floor. Looking through the wardrobe i find a cotton servants outfit. After drying off i put it on.4

I let Fang out of his bag, he curls up on an old dusty bed. I walk over to the fire place & grab a log from a small box. taking a deep breath, i sprinkle some dust from a pouch around my neck over the log. "bright light, warm light, fire bright please light." I whisper & a flame bursts to life. 5

"this shall do for tonight, in the morning we'll look around. good night fang"

Author notes

a working progress.
Chapter 2:-
http://storywrite.com/story/172076

Chapter 3:-
http://storywrite.com/story/245722

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  • morningstar1948
    January 17

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    Do not be afriad of the wolf

    The wolf is your spirit to guide you and watch over you. the other one is the eagle and the owls and thew star. you know what Nini mean we talk about it.
    I love you
    Momma


  • Werewolf Avarus
    January 16

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    oooh okays, interesting, lol. will have to look at the others now
    oh and don't forget, you need to start a new line each time someone speaks

    Kate