Tears, Paragraph One.

The tears streamed down a pale face, cold eyes searched the skies for a reason. 1

-Why? Why now? God dammit!- 2

A voice cursed within a lost mind, and still icy tears stained granite cheeks. Rain fell from the heavens in an unforgiving torrent, wind and ice froze against a still body. The heart within stone walls beat quietly as if trying to stop. 3

-Of all the time to say you love me...why when you die?-4

The voice continued on but the body and soul seemed lost within the droplets of rain.

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  • Vampiric souls
    May 16, 2008
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    Wow, this is really powerful for such a short chapter. I really liked it..