Last Chance.... by Blitz Tallon

The wind was blowing something fearce. It seemed to call my name.1

deep down i knew i shouldn't go. but something was calling to me. 2

Something no one would have ever expected. I cant tell the diffrece between the dream and real life anymore.3

there are times i think i'm awake then i'll wake up. then there are times i feel the brush of the wind and this this has to be real and without warning i'll wake to a dark empty room with no wind. 4

My name is Kie. I'm a 21 year old guy. And this is my story.5

*Kie's dream*6

"Kie where are you going? its so late. come back to bed." the soft voice of the sleepy woman who lay in my bed asks. I cand pull my self to look at her. i have a deep feeling if i look i'll be convinced i should stay. so insted i stand. pulling on a pair of boxers. and walk to the window.7

my voice sounds groggy and weak as i tell her. "i have to go. If i dont this dream will keep bugging me untill i do go."8

suddenly the woman stands the sheets only barely drape over her frame. as she walks to me it feels as though she's wishing with all her might that i'd never leave. her gentle hands carress my chest. her lips against my neck, force me to close my eyes. her eyes looked up at me longingly. myarms drape around her. her skin so soft. as i lean down to kiss her shoulder she moans gently into my ear.9

my boxers buldge and her hand gentle as it is, slides down to my boxers and tugs at the band. my fingers gently glide down along her arms to her waist. her gentle gasps as i touch all the right places. my hands rest at her thighs. she moves closer to me. as my hands slip around to her butt and slides her hand into my boxers.10

she slides the tip of her fingers over the tip of my penis.11

she slides the head of my dick out of the slit in my boxers. her inner thigh gently rubs up aganst my tip. i gently slide my tongue around her ear lobe. taking in a deep slow breath as my lips slide over her ear lobe. she gasps and slowly slides her hand along my lenth. she moans gently tugging on me harder. she removes her hand from my penis only to rub herself. and sliding her now wet fingers over the slit in my penis. i gently moan in her ear as i thrust towards her.she rubbs the head of my dick along her clit. then bounces up wrapping her legs around my waist. my penis slides deep into her tight wet pussy. the feeling is so great i cant help but thrust. her moans start to echo across the room. her pussy clenches around my dick. throbbing inside of her i held back my cum knowing that the longer i did the harder my dick would feel. her gasps and moans forced me to feel her pleasure. knowing she was feeling just as good as i was made me cum. her body went limp in my arms her breathing heavy, directly on my neck. her nails had dug into my back. she gently kissed my cheek. and wispered "please dont go."12

*end of kie's dream

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  • BastMoon
    May 15, 2008
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    smexy like you

    I love it baby...lemme kno when you add more baby!


  • Reaver Greeters member
    May 14, 2008
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    You may want to add 'erotica' to your category. Just a suggest..

    • wolf
      May 14, 2008
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      thanks i was looking for that but i'm blind see lol and i just passed it about 100 times.


  • Little Blue Bird
    May 14, 2008

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    It's getting hot in here

    Great job. Wonderful detail. I recommend a spell check and a proof read when you have time, some words run together. Over all I love it and can't wait to read more.