A Night (Paragraph)

A wise man once conveyed his wisdom unto me; he explained, One should never love for it leads to heart ache. An even wiser woman conveyed her wisdom as such; never kiss anyone, for to do so opens the energy pathways of One's body, combining the two, thus making it so that you are one. T'is lamentable that I did not heed this wise mother's words.59

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The first chapter of the story can be read here: http://storywrite.com/story/167302

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  • whichcraft Greeters member
    May 13

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    Thank you for giving me the link to your story. It seems such an inspirational paragraph it makes me wonder the genre of your original story. It makes me feel like it's a romance and may be character driven. It was well written and very poetic. Thank you for entering and good luck.