I Wish I Had A Dragon

before i start this is about me...1

the uh fantasy me.2

i still have my plated hair, my obsession with waring black and my odd habit of drilling holes in the ends of my fingers... yah I'm odd. well I'm not saying anymore about me so I'll tell you about my dragon... uh i guess on of many but I'll get to that when i start the story.3

my thirst dragon is called Headless as he is a special breed of dragon who is born without a head. A Bat Like Dragon. he is albino (all white with pink eyes.) and he never gets as big as his breed can actually get. he has an odd habit of blowing up cane toads (useful if you ask me) and only eats his food if you nuke it till its black. I get him as an egg so he'll only my shoulder to eat and lastly he dose make messes.4

so lets start5

I Wish I Had A Dragon6

the wizards acts were amazing. nothing like the smoke and mirrors rubbish most magicians would use. he gave himself ten fingers on one hand, blew up an egg, turned an audience member into an ice cream, blew up an egg, exploded a toad and finished without blowing up an egg. instead he just walked off stage. it was odd. but i was the only person to stand up and say something about it. and thus it was me he looked at, me he levitated across the room, and me who he asked if I could grant you one wish in exchange for an immediate exit what would it be? I naturally asked for a dragon. I expected a plush toy or an excuse to get out of doing anything. but instead he asked me to take my seat and told me he would see to it that i got my wish. when i got to my seat it was occupied by a large brown egg. everyone else in the theater had mysteriously left. so i picked up my egg and carried it outside...7

see part two for the rest.

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  • whichcraft Greeters member
    May 13, 2008

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    I am not sure if writing your sentences and paragraphs without capitals and seperate sentences was what you wanted, but your writing was descriptive.

    Welcome to storywrite and I wish you good luck in your contest entry.


  • Rev Alimae
    May 13, 2008
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    Very unique, I enjoyed your use of words. I wish you luck in the contest.