the wind didn't blow. the birds didn't sing. the car didn't fall. time had stopped and in the process foiled Tristan and Francene's suicide. they were teen kids like any other. they had the same problems, the same schooling, whatever. but when they reached boiling point they stole Tristan's father's car and sent it over a cliff and thats when time stopped. forever they would have the same view of the gorge they'd chosen to drive into.1
memories flashed past them like they were jumping back and forth threw time. Tristan saw flashes of the father he had grown to hate and Francene saw her menacing sisters. but in the flashes they saw good things things they would come to miss. it was just like people always said. when you die you see your whole life pass before your eyes. still the memories only angered them more.2
"they were right, this whole time they were right!" Francene silently shouted at her mind. a year passed and slowly they started to wish they hadn't driven over the cliff but it couldn't be undone. could it?3
to be continued...
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Well, I'm officially intrigued. I'm gonna check this out.
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oooh...intersting. can't wait to see how it turns out.
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yeah i'll get around to it at some point but i'd like to warn you that i have a bad habt of not finishing things.
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Lol I just saw the to be continued... So I was kind of lost like hey what happened. But I got it now. Only thing I saw was the lower case letters but you already know that =P. Otherwise very good piece of work. I like it.
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It was goood but you should capitalize your you letters though..
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yeah I've been making a bad habit of that lately.
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