Yeah this is really dark and not for people love being happy all the time injoy^^1
My life is gone2
I only see darkness3
My lover died4
he was only 195
I can't take life anymore6
As I take this knife7
And I say my goodbyes8
I slit my wrists and close my eyes9
letting my life force drain from me10
I smile knowing I will see him agan
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^^ me happy you got the MH welldone ^^ try my next conteset^^
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did you read the the only one rule for the pewrite?i dont want to DQ you plz read it agai
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dont worry about the comment i made this story will be all right but i wish you read what the contest was about
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a... powem... about an emo...
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Beautiful
What I'm looking for though it is short.
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wow veryy good ^_^
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OMG! i love this!!! its muy bueno! Good work!
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wow
ya it's dark. not a happy ending....i don't allways like happy endings
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arigato*smile*
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lol you were wrong
unlike the other happy lovers out there like me lol, i enjoy stuff like this. this is a really sad but touching poem. i liked how she didnt just kill herself just becuz but too see the one she loves again even though taking one's own life is pointless i liked it.
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thanks
glade u think so
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damn that is depressing! good job chiki!
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