What Would You Do?

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What would you do if someone you love2

Doesn't love you?3

What would you do if you think he's the one,4

But gave his ex a son?5

What would you do if he promised6

Not to do it again?7

What would you do if he kissed8

Your best friend?9

What would you do if he made you his wife10

And controlled your whole life?11

What would you do if you told him how you felt,12

And he walked away without a doubt?13

What would you do if he said he didn't care,14

And that life is unfair?15

What would you do if he made you cry16

And there was nobody to dry your eyes?17

What would you do if he treats you like nothing18

And when you say you're going to leave,19

He treats you like something?20

What would you do if he gave you his heart and just took yours?21

What would you do if he locked your heart up22

And you couldn't find the key?23

What would you do if your friends said your life was on the line24

And he said everything was fine?25

What would you do if he gave you so much stress?26

Would you break down and confess?27

What would you do?28

A contest entry

What would you do?

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  • Hismercy
    May 12, 2008

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    This was a great post to use on a contest, yet I have to agree with SW 'dreams' cause I was reading this post, and then I went to the contest to read what the host had to say...and I couldnt find the prompts they wanted you to use !?

    yet, I may have totally missed the prompt, yet all together that was a great poem !

    -Hismercy

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Dreams of Insanity
    May 12, 2008
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    Um...could you please tell us what prompt you used in your author's notes, please?