Right now, he is cutting he's wrist. The razor-blade feels cool touching his warm blood. As he tried to bleed out the times he spent with her. The good and the bad. The memories of a love that has now disappeared. Sitting there in the dark ripping his beautiful skin for a girl that doesn't care. For a girl who is as ugly in the inside as the outside.
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Intense
As a reader to me, detail is very important, and though this may be too short for some, the detail was definetly there.
Great job !beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Hmm.
This is very short and could be developed into a much larger story. Personally, I don't like suicide stories much. I prefer murder and mayhem
Is this about cutting or suicide.
You should categorize this Story as adult.
Welcome to Storywrite.
Andy
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this is well written...short and to the point. Sad though. Thanks for the read! well done!
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