I hate myself....

I have never been good at thinking fast. I never could remember the story correctly. I hated myself for that. I can't lie or I forget the lie that I gave. I can't fix my mistakes because I can't remember them. I can't answer a question with out taking time to think back.
If you asked me do i love you, please wait. If you ask me too fast I stop and say the only answer I never wanted to say. You want me in your life I need you to take things slow with me. I notice things that most people don't and I lack understanding usual knowledge.

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  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    May 11, 2008
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    Hi again.

    You should always capitalize the pronoun I.

    If you ask me (too) fast, I stop

    I notice things (that) - (knowledge)


    I'm a slow thinker. I usually ponder things carefully before I make a decision. I think of it as being a good thing. I would think that with the affairs of the heart, it is wise to be careful.

    I hope you are enjoying Storywrite.

    Andy


  • LadyLionnir
    May 10, 2008

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    It's amazing how much emotion one can put into such a small paragraph. You portrayed the feeling of stupidity well, and how much it hurts sometimes when your identified that way. I'm sorry if you feel this way, for your words are impressive.