A Mother's Love

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A mother's love is the center of our soul. A love that comes from The center of God's Being; connecting us and directing us in thought and word and deed.2

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A love that is always present; surrounding us, protecting us; no matter the distance , time, or place.4

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Her soothing hands when we are sick, her hugs when we are sad, her smile when we are happy makes our lives complete.6

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Transitioned or earthbound her love is always with us in the center of our soul. A bond to God that cannot break and strenghtens everyday.8

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She comes to us with each warm memory of all her loving deeds. She is the sunlight that warms us, the beauty of each sunrise, and the brightest star that twinkles in the sky at night.10

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She is always with us.  She will never leave our side.12

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  • nameless writer silver member
    May 23
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    This is a wonderful piece but in order for it to be considered as a poem it needs to be in more of a poem format. At the moment it seems like a bunch of short well writen paragraphs collected together. With a little re-formating this could be a wonderful poem.


  • Spiffy Ree
    May 10
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    Great entry! It's all so true!
    Good luck!!!