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A mother's love is the center of our soul. A love that comes from The center of God's Being; connecting us and directing us in thought and word and deed.23
A love that is always present; surrounding us, protecting us; no matter the distance , time, or place.45
Her soothing hands when we are sick, her hugs when we are sad, her smile when we are happy makes our lives complete.67
Transitioned or earthbound her love is always with us in the center of our soul. A bond to God that cannot break and strenghtens everyday.89
She comes to us with each warm memory of all her loving deeds. She is the sunlight that warms us, the beauty of each sunrise, and the brightest star that twinkles in the sky at night.1011
She is always with us. She will never leave our side.12
A contest entry
- Mother's Day by Spiffy Ree.
175 points, ended May 16, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
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This is truly beautiful. What an incredibly wonderful tribute to your mother, or any mother. My favorite sentence is:
Transitioned or earthbound her love is always with us in the center of our soul.
I'm very close to my mom so you've hit the nail on the head.


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beautiful

Your words speak volume's volumes of praise, my friend.
I agree with what you have penned here, and you have penned this so well.I guess you may call it 'prose'. It doesn't really matter what we call this write,as it is writen with so much love and tenderness, and I have enjoyed reading your thoughts, and I thank you for sharing your heart and voice with us.
Much love and happiness I send to you.
Your AP Friendly Angel,
~Angel-anne~
(aka Anne)

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This is a wonderful piece but in order for it to be considered as a poem it needs to be in more of a poem format. At the moment it seems like a bunch of short well writen paragraphs collected together. With a little re-formating this could be a wonderful poem.
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Great entry! It's all so true!
Good luck!!!

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