Mother dearest,1
You have pretty eyes2
Your hands work hard3
You gave me life, 4
care, shelter, food 5
joy, freedom, pity, luck,6
smiles, things, and help7
You were with me when I cried8
You embraced and soothed me when I was sad 9
You gave me a good education10
Freinds who are not bad influences11
You are indulgent12
giving me everything I want 13
With your love14
But now it's time to give you the only thing I can give15
Love16
I love you Mom 17
Please hug me18
Forgive me for being greedy19
For making you work hard 20
For worrying you 21
Let's cry together22
Hug me23
You are my treasure24
My only Mom25
You had to carry me for nine months26
Let's hug for nine minutes27
Thank you for everything you do28
Happy Mother's Day, Mom29
I'll give you the love you gave me all along30
Hug me, Mom 31
Happy Mother's Day.....32
Let's smile, not cry33
All day34
TOGETHER35
Hug me, Mom36
I love you37
Author notes
i love my mom. i don't know what to give her on mother's day. i'll surely give her love.....
A contest entry
- Mother's Day by Spiffy Ree.
175 points, ended May 16, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Is the story OK, and/or original?
Comments
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aww this was so sweet for your mom you should give it to her well done I loved it very emotional and powerful it really is great and I can't say much more than....wow this was great
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aw...
all these sweet comments..... thank YOU guys! for commenting me!
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Awwww, this was so sweet. It's easy to understand it really comes from the heart - you should read this to her!
I suppose she'll love it lots.
Really emotional and powerful!
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tahnk you!
thank you so much! i really did put effort in it!!!!!
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This was a very good poem and entry! Good luck! =D
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thx
thanks! i really did try on this one! i made it just for this contest!
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pass the tissue box...the pink box
This was very very beautiful and touching !
truly from the heart !
Thank you SOOOOOO much for posting this on this contest !
-Hismercy
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awwww.....
thank YOU for commenting. it really took a while to write. the poems that don't ryhme have more emotion sometimes. i wanted to 
too, @ first!!!!! 
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thanks
i tried to put emotion in it. my poems are usually not this long. how did you make those crying faces?? 
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hmmm.....
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to make those crying faces
to make the crying face make the eyes : and then use two sad mouths with no spaces (( and you put the eyes and the two sad mouths together and you get
I can see that this poem took time to write...you know when you read those exhausting long stories yet sometimes it takes us a while to read, or sometimes fast....yet for those who took the effort to post those long stories...now they have the patience and time to write ! -
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i think in a poem the hardest thing is the choice of words.....
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