Loves Ending

Through all the times they had spent together,Joe at age 17 and Lilly 16,had always been best friends. Always helped eachother out, and did things together. Well one night Joe got invited to a party at his friends house, he was told to bring a date, so he asked Lilly."Well of course i'll go with you joe,(giggle),actually, i have been meaning to tell you..."Lilly stared at him with great passion and love.Joe took her hand and whispered to her "I know Lilly,i know...and i do too..." It didnt take complete words to tell eachother how they felt. They have known eachother so long, it was pretty much expected.1

Later that night, Joe came to Lilly's house to pick her up,the party was just about a ten minute drive so he picked her up in his car. He arrived at 7:00 just as he had told her.She answerd the door in a gorgeous get together. Joe stared deeply into her eyes as he took her hand to go to the party.They went into the car and took a ride.2

They had a wonderful time at the party and danced a few times. Lilly saw that it was 11:20 and she knew she had to be home before midnight. She looked to Joe "Hey its getting a little late, i dont want to get in trouble, come on lets go please." Joe was talking to some jocks who arrived at the party previously.They had alcohol. He was drinking.Lilly grabbd him and told him he was being stupid. He became furious with her and slamed the door shut, lilly didnt freak, she knew that was the alcohol talking. She begged him to let her drive, he refused and sped up. The speed limit was 40, Joe was going 96.3

In the car they had a conversation about this. Lilly was screaming at joe. "Your going to fast,and you have been drinking, please slow down. I love you and i dont want you to get hurt, let alone me." Joe looked at her with tears, he didnt want to worry her. The car wouldnt stop, the alcohol had worn off a minute ago, he didnt want to lose his only love and best friend in the world.He tried to stop but couldn't. "Lilly put your seatbelt on. I just want you to know that i love you and i always will."Lilly looked at him with tears streaming down her face. "Then slow down joe, i love you too, now PLEASE slow down." Joe took off his seatbelt and turnd off the radio. "Lilly,please don't hate me,i am really sorry, i didnt think, i had too much to drink, and im stupid for driving, im sorry if i hurt you,and i love you so much..but"Lilly interrupted him,"Why are you talking like this?? Whats happening Joe??? Joe SPEAK TO ME,"Joe became silent, he knew that their was a huge hill comming up, he figured what was going to happen. "I love you lilly,i am truely sorry too.." Lilly was easily becoming worried."I love you too Joe,but whats wrong? JOE?SPEAK TO ME JOE TELL ME WHATS WRONG!!!"4

The car spun over the hill and flipped three times,rolling on the groud 5 times. Somebody near by saw the wreck and came to see what happend after they had called for help. The car was turned over, and Lilly was still inside, joe had been thrown from  the car. He scatterd towards the car to help lilly. He got inside and spoke to her morbid body, she was still alive. "Lilly please forgive me, im so sorry, *COUGH* i will help you lilly. im sorry.." He grabbed her out of the car and fled away from the car with her. The ambulance had just arrived after the fire fighters.5

They were both taken to the hospital,in the same room. Joe woke up and got out of bed. "Lilly?Lilly is that you?" He looked past about five doctors and cried. "Lilly please speak to me, im sorry,I love you Lilly please dont go..im sorry." He grew into tears. "Joe? Im sorry too joe,please tell my family and friends im sorry, and that i love them.I love you too joe, honestly i do,but i cant hold on..im not going to make it...i love you" She was fading fast,they all knew it. Joe looked at her and cried "Wait for me..."She closed her eyes while her hand was in Joes. She flatlined, the doctors moved joe out of the room and he was fine, he had some scars and burn marks from the wreck, but he was ok. He knew it,he knew that Lilly was gone. And he knew it was his fault. 6

Joe went home and wrote a letter to his family and to Lilly's family. He sat the note on his desk. Went into his fathers room, his father was a hunter. He took one of the hand guns out of the closet and went back into his bedroom. He cried out that he was sorry,and he screamd "Im comming lilly, just like i said." He killed himself, joe killed himself after killing Lilly. Now he could be in heaven with her.7

Author notes

This is just bleagh that wus on my mind and i duno liek it or not i dunt really care lol

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  • Itadakimasu
    April 16, 2005
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    This is one of those corny romantic love storys, and I'm not saying that in a mean way. I love those kind of stories. Awesome job on this.

    x3 Xarra x3


  • Autumn Raine
    January 15, 2005
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    omg this is so touching...im bookmarking this! you brought me to tears!! is this a true story? oh my. your writng is wonderful. you kept me wanting to read and read i love it!
    this is truly a great love story. thankyou so much for the great read.