Revenge (UNFINISHED)

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  • goddesspeace
    October 20, 2008
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    That's really good. I like the details!!

  • Simply Simple
    June 6, 2008
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    Reminds me of Maximum Ride. Nice work so far. I'd love to read the rest.


  • ohgre-13
    May 28, 2008

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    This was excellent i liked how detailed it was it helped mr get a good picture in my head keep up the good work

  • skye01 gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    I'm not usually into sci-fi but this held my attention and that says alot. I liked the discriptions of the character's and the visual movie your words provided.


  • Reaver Greeters member
    May 16, 2008

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    I found this to be rather fascinating. Enjoyed all of your detail and loved the idea. Very well done!! ~D


  • Forgotten Anomaly
    May 9, 2008
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    This does not fit the contest, revenge is one thing, the end of the world is another.

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