I'm Abby1
Justly crabby2
Not that stupid ball again3
Sit on it and spin4
Food!5
Gude!6
That bed is mine!7
Your chair is sublime8
Pet me now!9
You know how10
Snack time boy!11
Where's my toy?12
Cold water only please13
Gimme bone,don't tease!14
Bacon15
Taken16
I love you,dumb human17
My food?Add some Cumin18
Justly crabby19
I'm Abby20
Author notes
This is coice#1,a wittian rhyme can be read top to bottom or from bottom to top!
What did you think? Please comment!
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Surely you mean "cocker spaniel", not "cocker spanish" !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Robin. -
crystaldust 17-01-05 15:01
Really this should be done in woofs, woofs, woofs! It's a delight. Reminds me of my dogand the conversations we used to have. I hand't a clue what she was saying, but on our walks she would look up at me and start talking: so I answered and she seemed to understand what I was saying. It went on for nearly the whole walk. I'm still none the wiser, but we both had a whale of a time. Your dog is very lucky, because you really do understand and love her too. Quite a feat this. I loved it. Congrats. Hope it wins for sheer cleverness and bounce. -
crystaldust 17-01-05 15:01
Really this should be done in woofs, woofs, woofs! It's a delight. Reminds me of my dogand the conversations we used to have. I hand't a clue what she was saying, but on our walks she would look up at me and start talking: so I answered and she seemed to understand what I was saying. It went on for nearly the whole walk. I'm still none the wiser, but we both had a whale of a time. Your dog is very lucky, because you really do understand and love her too. Quite a feat this. I loved it. Congrats. Hope it wins for sheer cleverness and bounce. -
My puppy would love this!
Wow! How kind of you to translate this for Abby! I'm sure that she at least respects your intelligence in the area of linguistics; it can be hard for us humans to understand such a subtle and complicated language as Dog, let alone maintain the unique rythym of a message during the translation. Good job, please let Abby know that I like her poetry!
-Chari :-) -
This is just plain adorable! As a dog lover I can relate to this. My riley has his own chair (he is my boy). A delightful wittian
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Human to dog: You've got your own bed!! This is great. It's genuinely funny. There are those times when the look on their faces says it all!! Good luck in the contest.
~Michelle~
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GOOD JOB
Nicely done , i enjoyed reading your poem.
ya dogs are kinda like that.. keep it up
Edited on Jan 14, 9:39 p.m. because ''.
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