Sometimes I need to breath1
Sometimes I need to walk2
Sometimes I need to see3
Why sometimes I cannot not believe4
That my love is still for you5
And I need you to know that too.6
But You'll never want me to be7
The person that you see8
(Chorus)
Me, Its just me.
I cannot believe
You left me today
But what was wrong
Did i do something bad
Or is it just you can't face the facts
Just sometimes.9
Sometimes I hate myself10
Sometimes I cannot find11
Sometimes its right here12
Like when I need you, you can't hear.13
Now what is this I see14
The girl I used to be15
is just over you right now16
And I will never, make the sound
(Chorus 2)
Me, Its just me
I cannot believe
I over you now.
But what was wrong
Did I do something bad
Or is it just you can't face the facts
Just sometimes17
You know I needed you for all that time18
You walked away, at a very bad time19
Now you want me back, and I cannot say20
That I love you, its just not the way.21
(Chorus 3 & 4)
Me...Ohh its just me
I cannot..believe, I'm over you now
But you were wrong,
You were the one
who did something bad
And you face the facts, just face them22
Me, oh its just me, I can believe, that I finished you off.23
Now I have someone new, and he loves me true, You were wrong24
Face the facts, I found another one, less like you. You know what, Its just sometimes.25
oohhh, its just sometimes..just sometimes.26
Just sometimes....
A contest entry
- music by ImAfreak.
155 points, ended May 13, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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This was beautiful, i love the lyrics. They sound like they came from the heart. You are a very good songwriter
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Unfortuatly, I haven't had much insperation in most of my songs. I've never exactly experianced heart break, or when someone dies[well I have]
But I usually let my anger go out, or I cry.
But thanks.
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Wow, that was a very emotionally gripping song! haha. I loved it! I really enjoy a song that tells a story! Overall, I can't say there was anything wrong with it=! haha. Keep writing! Write On!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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This is a very good song, great lyrics
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cool
i like it !!!!!!!!! awsome
again why dint i write this??? -
Well, I have the tune, its a slow song, not exactly fast fast. But when I get the tune in chords, I promise I will post it.
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loved this though sadly i couldn't place it in tune:0 guess that's why i am not musical
Enjoyed the words none-the-less...bravo! Very easy to read
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