The smile that you give...is it out of love, or pain ?1
The smile that you give...is it going to make the other person shine or rain ?2
The smile that you give...do you give it out of respect or honesty?3
The smile that you give..do you give it out of whats left in you, or that selfish intimacy ?4
The smile that you recieve... do you accept what comes forth out of the others lips and face...or do you keep a steel heart and even a wall, to protect you from the shattering smile that wants to embrace ?5
The smile that you recieve....is this pleasureable to see, or do you smile back to hide the pain that you don't want them to see ?6
I believe the smile that you give or even recieve should come from a warm heart...a heart from a friend or loved one...a smile will show the warmth they have for you, a smile that is a mile wide, yet very close to you.7
Show a smile today...to a friend, a neighbor or even a loved one.8
See what your smile can do...and the attitude, just change it if you really need too.9
A smile can give or recieve a joy that has greater value than any toy one may see, try to make a joy for you or even me, take the first step, and give a smile, and see where it leads.10
What kind of smile
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awesome
hi,
i just loved it
i wish i cud always smile with all the honesty n all the warmth but at times i do it for other reasonns.....readding this brought all that to me
thanks for writing so beautifully
take care
keep smiling
i surely am
thanks for the smile
take care
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Thank you Angelbliss !
Is't wild how we all smile to different people for different reasons ? I wrote a poem that is similar to the attitude of a smile (please, I'm not trying to promote-this just came to heart) and here is the link if you get bored or have an interest
http://storywrite.com/story/165628
I'm totally glad that you enjoyed this
As you requested, ill keep smiling
and it was a joy to have you drop in and make a comment
-Hismercy
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wow Im giving you loads of smiles ...
(wait 4 it)
Wow Honestly nearly everything I do is a fake smile example when I see my boss ... Fake smile ( I hate him lol)
When I nearly fall over ... Fake laugh... Fake smile.
Being nice to a stranger ... Fake smile.
Im so fake to unknown people but to friends Im true all the way -
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Being true to your friends show who you really are
I can understand the fake smiles, infact I believe we all do it and sometimes on a daily basis whether we realize it or not.
Missi, it was a priviledge to have you stop by, I know this comment to you was late, and i can make excuses and excuses, but i think i will just smile
but for real, I realize this comment back to you was a bit late....but your comment on this poem means allot, thank you Missi.
-Hismercy
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A few smiles for you.
I try to smile every now and again. What I like to think is that all of God's angels get to help out the sun every now and again, and when it's hot outside, it's because the angels' smiles are so wide and bright and happy...they just hope that they make us happy too. I like that thought, childish as it might sound.
I liked this, especially:
"The smile that you recieve... do you accept what comes forth out of the others lips and face...or do you keep a steel heart and even a wall, to protect you from the shattering smile that wants to embrace ?"
because I find that I do this to people every now and again. Sometimes I'm just not accepting....
But, as I said before, I liked this. I had read it once before, I think, and had bookmarkied (bookmarked) it.
--Aden
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smile
this was neat. they say if you smile more often, it would make you happier.
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:p
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No need to be sorry
The smiley faces are cute, and im very glad that it is available to use on this site, or we might be stuck with this ----->
or sadly this! --->
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heh.....
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huh?
how do you make the poop??
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Went from a smile of pleasure to a smile of pooping
To make the those little terds you make you make one star guy * and then you spell poop...and then you do another star guy rightafter the second p.
*..poop..* take away the 4 little dots and you have this !
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Awesome
I liked it. There's a lot to a smile and a person's emotions, but you seemed to cover everything. lol anyways Well done
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What a precious comment
I'm glad you liked this poem Featherstream, it makes me smile knowing that you stopped by to read & make a comment !
I have to agree that there is plenty of emotions concerning just one smile !
thanks again Featherstream, your awesome !
-Hismercy
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It is quite powerful what a smile can do; and how many people perceive smiles themselves... so many definitions, reasoning behind them. some are meant to speak for us...
I loved this; simply because you have brung the essence of an emotional act and triggered so many stems from it to provoke a thought.
well done
blair ~
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Powerful to see
Rock on Prodigious ! There are sooooo many definitions behind a simple muscle based smile, and to believe this poem only touched the surface of just a few and and what we even go through !
Thanks Prodigious for sharing your thoughts and heart, your awesome !
-Hismercy
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