I login
And I find you
I tell you all my problems,
And you listen.1
I tell you my life
The horrible things in it
I know it's not just me with problems
But you have them too2
I will wait for the day
When you tell the problems
And I nod and listen.
Author notes
Dedicated to someone on here..... if you are that person, i shall tell you later.....
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Cool!
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how sweet
thats nice of you to find someone on here that listens. hope you are the best of friends with that person. this is a nice poem since it is dedicated to someone.
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Awww this was sweet Erika!
It was so simple and so grand all at the same time...just great...
I absolutely loved this and whoever this poem is written for they should know that they're lucky to have a friend like you!
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Very well expressed. Sort of read like a letter or a note. Hope whoever it was meant for found it. Very well done.....again..
~D
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simple. heartful meaning. worth a gold.
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sigh
that happens to me all the time!
i complain to my friends, yet sometimes i wish they would complain to me! it seems i am the only person who talks when i chat.
i liked this piece, it's bold and to the point. i can relate a lot to this
cheers!
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I really liked it, and we do talk to each other a lot. I like when you said "I login and i find you". Because everytime you or me see each other on right away we send a message. But yes i really liked it , and it is a very nice poem.
beginning: 5, language: 3, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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