Fear

My fear grows stronger, every day
That you will leave me,
Leaving me, to live with out you,
Leaving me to live alone1

I have fear
Even though i don't sece it.2

Love and fear
Bravery and fear
Happiness and fear
Sadness and fear3

Fear that i will lose you
Fear that something will happen
Fear that i will become sad
Fear that i will not become happy4

These fears all lead to one thing.
FEAR THAT I WILL LOSE YOU

Author notes

otay.... so i don't think i did that good on thi poem....

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  • warner478
    July 14, 2008
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    To good to be true.

    Oh my goodness it is spoken from the heart. I love it.

    beginning: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5.


  • lenore2010
    June 27, 2008
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    Aww this one is sad. = (
    This was very emotional


  • Dreams of Insanity
    May 21, 2008

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    I thought this was a great poem, Erika. So full of emotion and to be honest...I related quite well with this one. My greatest fear in life is that I will lose all who are important to me and I'll be alone again. When i think about it...I get scared and I think, "If that happened what will happen to me?"

    If I lost eveyrone again, I don't know if I'd be able to carry on.


  • Reaver Greeters member
    May 18, 2008

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    This was very strong and emotional. What is the word 'sece'? Should it be 'sense'? Just curious. Well expressed; i enjoyed it Well done!!


  • Paralyzer13
    May 17, 2008

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    this is a good poem i liked it. I think you could be a little more discriptive though. But i could feel the emotion but not that much of it.

    beginning: 3, language: 2, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 3, characters: 3.


  • DreamerDragon
    May 12, 2008
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    Aww...how sad. I feel the emotions in this poem. It's really good!

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