my smiles are my sobs1
my laughter is my tears2
I have felt this pain 3
for so many years4
outside i am smiling5
but inside i am screaming6
and no one really understands7
exactly what i'm feeling8
never crying, never grieving9
never loving, never living10
true emotions you never see11
only ever one side of me12
always false, never true13
you see me as i want you too14
but which is real and which is not?15
not even i'm sure any more16
I've acted this way for so long17
don't even know where i belong18
is it here or is it there?19
in the end why should i care?20
i'm falling apart at the seams21
with no one tho hear my screams
A contest entry
- Emotional tales by Reaver.
130 points, ended May 22, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
... i was depressed...
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Nice
Wow that was a nice poem -
I loved it! You didn't hold anythink back. I think that you wrote what you were TRULY feeling. Good job!
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Bravo!!
I loved this. It's very well articulated and after reading it, i almost felt desperation. Don't really know why. Very sad....And delving. Loved it. Bravo!! -
wow... that was deep man... i mean chiki... i can feel the pain... good job!
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Why are you writing this? I was very powerfull.
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... i was depressed when i wrote it...
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