The Ghost of Valley Who

There were these three men, one a chinese, one a caucasian,one african-american.
Now these men were on a haunting trip. They had to stay in this house that was haunted by a ghost named Valley Who.So the winner that have stayed all night will win some money. Ok, now the chinese man went in first. He sat at a table, with a lamp on it reading a book.(He heard a voice)1

I'm the ghost of Valley who, ain't nobody here but me and you. So the chinese man ran out of the house speaking chinese.2

Now the caucasian man went in, he went into the kitchen to fix him something to eat.(he heard a voice).3

I'm the ghost of Valley who, ain't nobody here but me and you. He ran out so fast that he forgot to turn off the stove.4

Now the african-american man went in, he sat on the couch in the living room, kicked off his shoes, got real confortable looking at t.v.(He heard a voice)5

I'm the ghost of valley who, ain't nobody here but me and you.
The african american man said,"Just wait till I get my shoes, ain't nobody gonna be here but you."6

So no one won the money. In the amount of $10,000,000.00.

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  • moonwriter
    June 6
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    Huh

    I'm sorry, but I didn't really get it. It started out like a normal joke and then the ending didn't make too much sense. I think I lost the point of the joke. Ddi you make this up yourself? If you did, then good job on at least making it up! This was interesting, but a little confusing. I'm sorry, but it didn't make me smile. Good job though!


  • GuitarShank Moderators member
    June 2

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    Hm... it was set up like a very generic joke, and that kind of took away from the idea of making a story.

    Also, I think it would have been better without the last line. That part seemed to downplay the humor a bit.

    Thanks for entering


  • TheBlueRoad
    May 10
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    HA HA HA!!! "Just wait till i get my shes, ain't nobody gonna be here, but YOU." That's funny!


  • Midnight-In-Prayer
    May 6
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    I...don't get it. I like the setup and everything, but I don't get it. Am I missing something?


    • TheBlueRoad
      May 10
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      look carefully at this sentence. "ain't nobody here, but you" in contrast to the ghost's voice "ain't nobody here, but me and you."

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