The demise of Tiddles

The day old Daisy’s cat got stuck up the tree, the fire brigade were on strike, so it was the army attending in their huge fire trucks known as green goddess’s. They were wonderful and had Tiddles down in no time. Daisy was so grateful she invited them all in for tea and cakes.1

They all tucked in, Daisy praised them thoroughly “I adore Tiddles” she said, “he is my best friend” 2

As they were leaving she gave each soldier a hug.3

They all piled onto the fire truck and waved goodbye.4

Unfortunately as they drove away….they ran Tiddles over!5

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  • Ava Noire
    January 18, 2005
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    lol! poor Tiddles and mrs. Daisy. The irony of it all

    Enjoyed reading and good luck!

  • David Houston
    January 17, 2005
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    Excuse me Danna, but I find that completely sexist and err well somewhat true! However, I've been told more than once (and various women in different words), by women, "If I could reach with my tongue, I'd have to learn to not answer the phone so much!" Peace and Best Regards Danna, David

  • Touchof1der
    January 16, 2005
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    Oh no!!! This is not a good way for a resue to end is it? I enjoyed the short story though. Poor Tiddles! Good luck in the contest!
    ♥ Kimberly

  • Danna Hobart
    January 16, 2005
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    Poor Tiddles!

    I am a cat lover, unlike Sistatroll, even though she has two of them! She will probably think the ending is the best part.

    My friend who lives on the California coast where giant coastal redwoods grow in abundance had her kitten get stuck in a tree, and after four days when the kitten had still not come down, she hired a "tree man" to get her down, and he told her that he has found skeletons of kittens in trees, because unlike adult cats, kittens get in trees and can't get down.

    Women and cats have a very close link, the feminie mystique. We make men uneasy the way cats do, and we are unpredictable, feisty, and finiky, sleek and cunning the way cats are.

    Men are more like dogs. They scratch and slobber a lot, and we all know that if they could reach, they would lick themselves.


  • SusanL
    January 15, 2005
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    What is it with us women and our cats? Sometimes you would think we are ruled by them! Mine is named Fritzi and she is the Princess of the palace. No one enters without her consent!
    Cute little story here!
    Susan


  • mystiqstranger
    January 13, 2005
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    awwww...lol...thats irony for you...poor daisy..thanks for the giggle...God Bless
    tyler

  • macandrew
    January 13, 2005
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    good

    Ironically funny. I didn't quite find this as smoothly written as most of your works. A good story though.

    thanks,
    John

  • Diamond
    January 13, 2005
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    Strange Event!

    "Oh my God!" That was awful especially after they were all invited in for tea and cakes. What a tragedy. Poor Tiddles used up all her lives in just one day. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest. Avril

  • heartnsoul
    January 13, 2005
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    I started to chuckle at the irony of it all because I could see something like that really happening. Then I scrolled down to comment and said aloud "ohhh....shoot!" I can only imagine the look on the faces of everyone involved! Good luck in the contest.


  • wattle
    January 13, 2005
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    Good God Ms Wales a horror story --- I like - thank you

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