the Ever After

Hello, my darlin,1

How are you doing in your life? Fine I hope. Well for me I'm singing(not out of tune ok.)and praising God the Almighty. It is very cloudy here, it's like you walking on clouds, also there is pearly gates as high as you can imagine, we all precious souls walk through them. It's beautiful, you should see it.(When it is your time I will come for you). Up here we have white horses,oh, and the angels are very beautiful. All dress in white, with golden wings.And on Sundays we have service where there is a big band, cause, you know some muscians are here to(but they are singing a different tune now).Mommy is ok. Don't worry about me, The Ever After, is beautiful, peaceful,and very much awarding. 2

I'm with grand-ma and grand-dad. They all send their love. You carry me in your spirit every day. I see you when you are sleeping, Oh, here we don't sleep, our job is to watch over our love ones. And I ask the Lord "Please,when it is her time to join me, let it be simple, not suffering. You will love it here. We all sit at this big long table eating some of the best food you have ever tasted, (it's not like earth food but, better). We are all dressed in white robes(you never seen white this white before) Tide can't get this white.3

Well just a few words from your mother to you. Always remeber that I am watching you, be good now, love you.4

Love,5

Gertrude Bailey6

Your heavely mother.

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a lovely letter from her heavely mother.

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  • That is REALLY good. Very well written. Good luck for my contest.

  • This was really nice, I felt it could have been slightly longer but it was very well written. A couple of minor grammar mistakes but a beautiful letter. Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest. I hope Heaven is as beautiful as you made it sound!

  • Beautiful, beautiful, BEAUTIFUL! I wish love ones could really write to us from Heaven.