Cum Rain Or Shine 4 - End

Cum rain or shine 4
 
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Bending over, she attached the two ends of the electrical appliance to the metal that was pushing my pussy walls so far apart.1

Looking down I saw it, my eyes widened as she held the device in her hand, while throwing the drenched towel onto the floor.2

I could the switches, the knobs, the wires as the poked, stemmed from my pussy lips. I felt a strange feeling overwhelm me, as my suspicions had been right, oh so terribly right.3

Smiling she let go of the first pronged wire.4

“Don't look so frightened this is what you wanted wasn't it? To come? Don't deny it, you want to cum?”5

I did not answer, only stood still, shivering in the coldness of the bathroom. 6

Wishing that I had not been so stupid, but at the same time feeling so horny that I would beg her to shove something, long, thick, rippled and rigid into my tight, pulpy pussy hole.  Shoving her huge, hard cock inside my cunt. Driving it in and out... in and out,thrusting it; till my cunt was full of the creamy substance that she would make me lick of her cock, and her fingers.7

Instead I had the next best thing, the next worst thing, and all in between. I knew my mistress was far to absorbed in making me cum to deny me of that right.8

Letting go on the second prong, she patted my clit, letting the sweltering pain tamed my entire pussy for those few moments, before stepping outside the shower, closing the door behind her. The wires hanging from the sides, hanging from my pussy. My whole body under her submission.9

I was now not only her sub, but I was her slave. I was a slave to her discretion or lack of.10

I closed my eyes, blinking away the tears. Blinking away all the fear I had held so tight inside.11

All through the night, all that trauma of loosing her, of watching her tame me into this helpless, worthless, dismissive prude. Scared of my own abilities to scream, to love the pain, to breath in every ounce of her twisted, sadistic love. This slight hardcore obsession with pain.12

Now all of that, all of this, all of my fears were to be released.13

Opening my eyes, I looked towards her.14

Her sexy, seductive dress lay on the floor. As she stood naked, her own legs spread. The wires between her own pussy lips, Her own set of clamps attached to her nipples.15

Looking down, more closely I noticed something. Something that rendered me into a heightened state of confusion, and excitement.16

Attached firmly to her own pussy lips, Two prongs just like mine dug into her tender skin. 17

I could see the juices already running down her dry skin. As she held the device in the palm of her hand, wincing as she played with the clamps attached to her nipples.18

As if she almost knew what I was saying inside my head, she let out a wickedly insane laugh, reaching for the knob. 19

My eyes widened in delight in fear.20

“What did you really think that I would let you have all the fun?” She boomed, the bathroom echoing, my ears ringing so pleasantly. “You should never trust a mistress in heat,” she hissed, her fingers wrapping around the knob. 21

“Cum rain or shine baby, rain or shine.”
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~ End ~ 24

Author notes


~END ~

(Apologies to K.M for taking it to far; it just ripped out of my hands and I could not control it. Not that you would read on, so I guess that it is ok ^.^ )

To The people who read and commented; Thank you.

I don't think I have ever delved into pain as much as I did in this story; or close enough to it. Maybe I have, but not in a lesbian mistress - slave way.

It was slave - I spent the afternoon reading up on it; she was her slave; not her sub ...difference

Thanks again for reading
Please let me know how you felt about this part & the story as a whole

Always Blair ~

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  • enchantress silver member
    October 28
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    Great ending Blair. They both got what they wanted and I think they both had fun.

  • mcfreeman
    July 30
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    Such a nice sexy series

  • woah =] i liked that alot it was so good i loved how you worked the title into the end or maybe you just took the title from the end lol either way i loved the ending. It left you in a bit of suspense but in a good way or part 3 was amazing too i just thought id comment both here lol! Good job

  • Noooo! This is the endsie?

    I likey'd...I was hoping for more But, oh well, to each their own...

    Hoping you are well.

    --Aden

  • Hahaha at the ending, never trust a mistress on heat. HAHAHA. Good wai to cut this done.
    Didn't seem as much as the other chapters, seemed to just get into the heat of treatment with her putting the treatment on herself, then it ends with the title.

    Creative and good yes, fulfilling. No.

    All in all you did superb babe and I am happy the way this came out despite the ending.

    Ebb
    ily =D

  • Nice end.

    I'm glad you didn't go into how painful that really would be... I would have started bleeding.
    The only thing that bugs me about this is that you only spelled "come" correctly one time. That's about it. It seemed very good, though simplistic. With this kind of thing, it's better to let a reader's imagination run wild.

  • V l
    May 6

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    This was a great ending. Man I though I could make graphic punishment hard core sex stories but I bow down to the queen.

  • This is the end?! We didnt even get to see the consequences! I cant work out right now whether that is a good thing or a bad thing! The thought of using electricity like that scares me. I couldnt imagine anything more painful or at least I dont think I would want to, yet somehow in this story I wanted to read more. You have corrupted me! lol. (Not that I would want to be electricuted myself of corse, but I never thought I would enjoy reading about it).

    You did a fantastic job with this whole story but maybe a sequal would be a good idea. I want to know if these women have a permenant relationship after this night or if the mistress goes back to her boyfriend. A secret love affair might be quite exciting as well. lol. Keep up the good writing my love.

    X Amber X


  • Fizbop Greeters member
    May 6
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    nice ending and very well wrapped up. this is really good. fantastic read

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