To My Bruder

To My Bruder,1

Hopefully you tend to read this. 2

It would make me happy that you did.3

You've done so much for me.4

Now that today has come,5

Its time I did something for you. 6

Tell me what, and I shall do it.7

Just remember, smile today,8

Because its you 17th birthday!

Hopefully the one whom this is directed to knows who he is. everyone can comment!

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  • I Am Gun
    May 8, 2008

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    awwww this is so cute, i love things that are written for people that are close to you especially when theyre happy like this one!!


  • Dreams of Insanity
    May 8, 2008

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    So cute Jane!
    David is old now, neh?
    Hehe, just kidding.
    Super cute Jane...*tackle hugs* I LOVE YOU!


  • NinjaMegami
    May 6, 2008

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    oh.....

    this was cute! and the background is just as cute! i like this line: Just remember, smile today,8 oh.....this was cool! bye!


  • HaXXoR
    May 6, 2008
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    nawww.. you are so cute jane ty. it's one thing you could do for me.. be happy


  • Aaez
    May 6, 2008
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    Awwwwww for David, isn't it! it's cute. =D...


    • Midnight Countess
      May 6, 2008
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      Ok! U caught me! Yes! Its for David! *lift her hands to show that they are red with paint*

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