Blind Raven makes its way to my window seel what does it want is it real1
Forever more it calls out in a beautiful roar2
I ask what is the meaning of this roar why are you here in a unbeliveable fear3
"I am a blind raven but I have a sixth sence and I no you have a weight on your back that is mighty dense" 4
"What are you talking about blind raven I have nothing that I weight so what is the meaning what are you trying to say"5
"You have a lot of sadness" the raven replied and right there the raven died!6
I lifted up his body and put it on the table in aww were the words true in the ravans call7
I thought of sadness and what came to mind was my dear lady mary Linbine8
She was fattely ill and had been in the hospitall for seven days I had no reson to be happy or give praise9
Then the phone rang in a loud patter I answerd to find out the matter10
They told me my dear Mary Linbine had passed I let out a cry why did my love have to die11
Then as I hung up the raven came back to life I quickly reacherd for the sharpest knife12
"What do you want from me" I scream 13
"There is somthing you must see" said the raven14
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"What what must I see what do you want from me"16
" I was sent to give you a messege from your fair lady she told a little blind bird to tell you she shall love you forever more"17
Then the raven swooped out the window18
And because of this blind raven I new that my love was looking down on me with love and one day we would meet again up above.19
Author notes
I like drama and sespence
what do you think of my poem
Comments
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I can't help but feel like your kissing a little ass with this.
Not exactly the paragraph I had in mind but... Here's your prompt. Write a story about a cursed forest that no one ever returnes from. This is alot broader then most peoples prompt so try to be as original with it as possible.

