::Alone::

One day there was a teenage girl. Who's name was Maria. She liked to write poetry and sometimes even stories. One day she thought that she was all alone and that no one understands her. Till Maria met Ryan. 1

Ryan is Maria's best friend! He tells her he'll always be there for her no matter what. She smiles and believes she not so alone but she still had some doubts. She would go home and write depression poems about her life. She would show it to Ryan . 2

He didn't like what the poem said . He knew Maria was hurting deep down . He wanted to help her. So he tries the best to make her happy. Every time she felt alone he told her to talk to him.3

Maria talks to him and tells Ryan all her problems. Deep down she still felt very alone and sad . She knew that he couldn't handle or fix her problems. She wanted to handle it on her own. Ryan wouldn't let Maria face it alone.4

He wanted to be a good friend. So every time she wanted to do something alone . The answer from him would be "no". She would groan and say "fine". He smiled and hugged her tight.5

She frowned and said "You can't always help me". He smiled and said "I know I can't but I want to be there as much as I can". He was just showing he cared for her. She doesn't even realize how much he truly cares about her. She would trust him cause she knew he would never do anything to hurt her.6

She still feels very alone inside. She thinks no one understands what she going through. So she fight alone . Ryan tries to lean a hand but Maria doesn't want his hand to offer. She making a big mistake. She alone and cold.7

Ryan is very sad for her. He really wants to understand. That life is sometimes hard but friends are there for you till the end. He cares about her so much. He doesn't want to lose a friend like her. 8

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Maria and Ryan's Friendship grows stronger and sometimes weaker everyday!

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  • sounds alot like my releationship with my friend hollie sadly

  • Sad story, enjoyed reading it, i usually feel alone but i remember i still have all my friends here on AP Great story.

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    December 3, 2008

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    This is sad. So many youngsters feel alone, and I suppose in the end there is only ourselves. Line Seven - makes me feel helpless as "Ryan".
    This is a good write, but I wonder is this a self description??
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