What’s that I see on the thorn bush
Many luminary thorny Black Roses
The wind coiling through the trees went swoosh
In the wind a Black Rose flew1
Shivering as the freezing wind loomed over me
Clear sapphire water came from rope-like hoses
I sat there wondering why the water was on
Until I saw him through the water2
His thick lanky blonde hair was smooth enough to almost pet
The fire like sunset sank below highstones
Causing the world to begin to dim
Looking up his chocolate brown eyes wanted to make me melt3
Staring at those eyes I try not to cry
My body felt like fire as our purple hearts met
A floating cloud passed by in the sky
The Black Rose flew by as we kissed good-bye4
Watching him disappear we broke apart
Unable to hold on any longer I sit down and cry
Knowing he came back just to see me one last time
A last crystal tear falls from my face5
Watching my last tear fall on his grave
My Fragile saddened purple heart has a crack in it
Wishing we had enough time to fully say goodbye
Author notes
I LOVE TIGERS
A contest entry
- Love Poems by Dont Eat The Yellow.
140 points, ended July 13, 38 entries
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wow this was a really pretty poem
then i started laughing my ass off because yoiu said you love tigers i mean random much? -
I loved the poem, Jen. So deep so sad...I just liked it!
And then...I get to the author's notes...
YOU ARE A RANDOM ONE, AREN'T YOU!? -
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....................... i really really like this......................... and i think that means you a finalist............... thanks alot........................................... this was really .. .. .. .. powerful
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Thanks
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Whoa Jenny! I didn't expect that!
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