Love to die for I shall' to find it would be the meaning to my life ................................................................................................To be without love is like to be with out air' Love is so deep deeper then the lowest vally in the ocean ................................................................................................It can bring pain it can bring joy either way you will be asking for more ................................................................................................It can come and go like a cold or stay forever in all its glory ................................................Love is to die for' and to die for it I shall ................................................................................................ A Tribute to the famous poet known for his works such as the raven Edger Allan Poe who reflected his poems in a darkened version of love for he never was truely happy with love He is my inspiration..
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I LOVE TIGERS
A contest entry
- Love Poems by Aunt Teenii.
140 points, ended July 13, 2008, 35 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think
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wow this was great...but the dots are annoying just hit enter
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This has a lot of emotion, the descriptions you did are good. I think you should be more descriptive though. But the emotion in it was great!
beginning: 2, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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Chino X_O
Chino! That was amazing, It was very deep and very impressive. Your structure will improve over time and the dots really were not much of a problem. You had a few grammar mistakes and a few spelling errors but over all this was very impressive! Muy bein~
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Wow, very raw emotion here. But true. The dots are distracting though. Maybe you should remove them.
Good poem. :D
Wlecome to SW!
HT
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