Tender heart High ~ Mistress in the making~ Chapter Five- Trouble

Chapter Five
 
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Walking through the streets, I held Ellie in my arms. Her body heavy, sinking into mine. Making it almost impossible to carry her through the busy streets.2

I did not know what to feel. I was I was fuming. 3

How could she do what she had just done? Especially when it was her who was so adamant about going back to school.4

I wanted to take her back to my house, my room. Have her lay on my bed take of her clothes, and take advantage of her. I wanted to take her back to my home, and take care of her. Make her feel what it is like to be with a girl like me, show her what a woman's touch felt like.5

That was if she had not already felt a womans touch. That was if she was not what those girls had called her, what Doug had called her. If she was not already a lesbian.6

Though if I took her back to my house. There was a large chance that my parents were home, and an even larger chance that something could go bizarrely wrong when she came out of the illusion that she was in. She might think that I was trying to take advantage of her for all the wrong reasons, almost as if I was raping her.7

So I forgot about the fantasy. Though it still played out so sweetly in my mind as I walked down the alley way towards our school. I did not think those fantasy's would disappear any time to soon.8

“Look at all the colors Colby,” she whispered, as we grew closer to the school. “I can see them all, like a rainbow, and see that man?” she asked, her finger pointing to a dying tree.9

Trying not to laugh, I nodded Walking her past it. Feeling stupid that I was lying to her, letting her delude, letting her fall into her illusions. When what I really wanted to do was throw her into the nearest pool, or slap her hard in the face.10

How was I going to explain to our teacher in English why she looked like she had fallen of the face of the earth, and had the brain capacity of a two year old. Even if that.11

She had put me in a god damn shitfull position. One that I did not even know how to take to. Did I yell, scream, force her to snap out of something I did not even understand? Or continue with the way I was handling things? I felt sick, I could not understand why anyone would use drugs, do drugs.12

Dragging her through the street, now her legs had given way. I tried painfully to life her up. Trying to adjust her body so that it was comfortable for the both of us.13

Then again I had bigger fish to fry.14

I had not really thought much about how we were going to get back into the school unseen. After all by my watch we were already running fifteen minutes late. Yet we were to close to turn back and forget about going back.15

I could go through the back, the way we had come out in the first place; but the thought of those girls tearing Ellie to shreds entered my mind, and the last thing I wanted to see was Ellie lying face in the dirt, covered in blood, and broken bones all because she was to high to defend herself. While I was to weak to even put up a fight.16

I could go through the front gate, pretend she got hurt out on the oval, and that we were in the girls bathroom most of lunch trying to clean her up. Then I would have to explain why we weren't in sports, and how we managed to escape the toilets unseen my the janitor.17

My only other option as I saw it, was to go through the car park entrance, and try to maneuver my way from there. I mean if by chance anyone came there were plenty of bushes I could throw Ellie under.18

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Getting to the car park was easy.20

I walked around the gate, dragging Ellie through the cars like a maze. Swerving left, and right. Each time being more difficult as she thought this was a game for her body to become sloppy, almost rigid.21

“Wee...Swing me around Colby, I can fly...wee,” she stuttered, her arms stretched out wide slightly blocking my view.22

Holding her arms down, I had just had about enough of her getting in my way. 23

“That's it,” I yelled, just loud enough for her to hear. 24

Holding her arms close to her body I pushed her angrily against a car, It took all my might not to slap her in the face, as her eyes rolled back in her head, and she slid down the car; onto the ground, her head sinking underneath my skirt. In all the wrong places.25

For a second I stood still, feeling her face pushed against my panties. 26

I felt her face sink deeper, as she moved forward resting her head between my legs, and felt the tip of her nose pushing against my sensitive spot.27

My hand found her hair. I ran my fingers smoothly through it, pushing it behind her ears. 28

Then placing my hands on either side of her temple I took a deep breath in. Pressing myself into her face, rubbing myself slowly up and down.29

“Colby... I can feel your pussy,” Ellie moaned, her hands somehow finding my ass.30

I felt them slide, sliding underneath my panties. Her fingers were finding their way around my ass cheeks.31

I felt my dampened pussy becoming wetter, as she lazily caressed my warm ass under my panties. 32

How could she be doing this, did she ever realize what she was doing? Should I stop, move away? How could I refuse when it felt so good?33

“Colby, your panties are wet... did you pee yourself,” she giggles, lifting up my skirt. Her finger pressing against my clit through my panties.34

The sensation of her finger prodding at my clit was enough to send me crazy. All of a sudden I could feel myself pushing my pussy deeper into her face, her finger rubbing up and down, stroking me through my drenched panties.35

I held onto the car, my hands gripping the bonnet as she continued to touch me. 36

Closing my eyes, I breathed this in, enjoying every moment of it while I could.37

I felt delirious. I felt high, I tried so hard to hold back from letting out a giant scream of tortured pleasure as she started toying with my pantie line. Her lips pressed firmly against my thighs. Her warm, moist tongue gliding up and down.38

She was so high and wasted, and I was taking advantage of the situation. Yet I had never felt this kind of danger before, I had never felt this kind of gratification before. To the extent I felt like I was going to have an orgasm on her face.39

“COLBY,” I heard a familiar voice screaming.40

Opening my eyes, I looked ahead; seeing my mother and the principle walking towards us.41

At the precise moment, I looked down to tell Ellie that she had to stop, that we had to get ready to defend for out lives, she sank her teeth into my clit, biting right through my panties. 42


“FUCKING WHORE,” I screamed, letting out a shrieking scream, My hand banging against the car bonnet as I felt myself cumming.43

“YES ELLIE...YES FUCK...” I screamed,  not even bothering to worry about the horrified looks upon the adults faces.44

I felt her pull my panties to the side, her tongue lapping at the pulpy potent cum that dribbled down my walls and onto her lips. Enriched in the moment...taking my first ever orgasm in.45

Then reality hit home.

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  • enchantress silver member
    October 28

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    WOW, god Blair this is great. and the twist at the end where Colby finally gets what she has wanted is soo good.
    HOT, HOT, HOT

  • mcfreeman
    July 24
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    climatic

  • This story has a lot of potential, you may want to fix up a few things that tend to pull the reader back from what you're trying to get across though. I suggest going through and checking your tenses, you tend to skip from past to present a lot.
    You don't need to use caps to get your point across, using exclaimation points does that with much more impact.
    Double check your spelling too, (principle should be principal for example.)
    The story is a good one, although i find it ends rather abruptly. Otherwise, good piece good luck in the contest.


  • Melody C
    June 12
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    HOT

    HOT EXTREMELY HOT ESPECIALLY THE END

  • Ooh, that was hot! I could really feel the emotional torment Colby was going through there, she wants Ellie sooo much yet loves her too much to want to take advantage. This whole scene was so teasing, I loved it! I liked how Ellie didnt actually touch her directly but only through her underwear, that would drive me wild if I were in that situation. The fact that she still managed to climax just goes to show how intense the experience was. The twist at the end was unexpected. I am so intregued to find out what happens next!

    X Amber X


  • Fizbop Greeters member
    May 5

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    intresting part of your story very nicely worded and nice flow, this is really a good addition to your story.


  • Hismercy
    May 5

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    you were definetly not hungry for food when this was written

    Theres so much I would love to share, but to start off, I noticed a few spelling errors (need another L on this word, a few lines down there was O that needed to be added, just little things)

    Let me say first, that I'm glad that there was some of us that started reading when you started posting these chapters back on chapter one !

    I believe as the story was being created and the characters were forming, I got sucked into this chapter pretty early...back in the beginning of paragraph 10 where she was "not trying to laugh"...at that point I was already sucked into this story.....if my house was on fire, I would have to let the house continue to burn until I finished this story, then I would get out.

    Chapter 6 is going to be very interesting how your going to get mum and the principle fitted in the next chapter (maybe they get ran over by a truck that was trying to get out of the parking lot)

    Keep writing Prodigous, and dont stop !

    -Hismercy

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