Cum rain or shine 2

Cum rain or shine 2

Shivering, I opened the car door. My legs swinging out onto the gravel driveway of my home.1

I was shirtless, and freezing. As a strong current of wind picked up and blew circle around my breasts. Making my nipples once again as hard as bullets.2

Standing still, My arms tucked tightly under my breast. My hands cupping them for protection more than to keep them from the chill. I waited patiently, as her car door opened, and she to stepped onto the crunching driveway, her eyes piercing as she turned around staring intently at me.3

“Well what are you waiting for? Your not going to disobey me are you slut?” she asked. The word slut seemed to slither of her tongue like a serpent, digging its venomous teeth into my Virgin skin.4

I looked around, down the street. Seeing that all the street lights seemed to be shining upon my house, my driveway. The thought that someone could just drive by and see me there half naked scared me to death.5

I knew what kind of men were out there. Ones with their sleazy eyes, and their tongues that seemed to slap against their lips, at the thought of a young girl bearing herself openly for them to see. For them to take and to use against you. Whether it be for their own personal use, or the use of embarrassing you further. 6

Though now I had another fear on top of male sexual predictors. 7

The thought that one of my mothers friends, another female could just drive by and see me there standing half naked, shivering in the cold Was enough to make me want to break down and cry. Begging that this night could be over. Wishing I could just run away, and escape it all.8

I knew I never could. I needed it so much that it ached me to believe that I had even let her violate me like that in the first place. That I could let her degrade me on such a level. Such a level that felt so good, it was fast becoming a compulsion.9

Shaking my head, My fingers running smoothly over my nipples; trying to keep some hopes of arousal streaming through my blood. I turned towards the house, slamming the back door of the car shut, and looked at her, hope glistening in my eyes.10

“I can't do this tonight, it is not that I don't want it, it's just I am cold, and tired, and I have no shirt on and am standing out here in the middle of my driveway waiting for someone to drive by and see me like this. It is embarrassing. I just... I don't think it is the right time.”11

Giving me a bewildered look, she walked across the gravel driveway. Kicking her feet underneath the stones, and walked until she was facing me. Her arm wresting against the hood of the car, her tongue sensually traveling across her soaked lips.12

“ I will ask you once again, to go march inside. Take your clothes of, clean yourself up, and wait for me to continue my commands. Do I make myself clear, or do I have to drag you inside my your hair?”she asked, placing her hand cruelly on my shoulder.13

“You wouldn't dare,” I said, my voice crackling, my heart pulsing under her heavy grip.14

“Do not test me, I am warning you right now. If you do not want to suffer more than you already will be. I would strongly suggest you do as I say. You have submitted to me. You are in no danger so do not even think of using the safe word because there is no excuses, and you will only further the anger I already have built inside me.”15

Looking her in the eyes confused,I felt my eyebrows burrow. 16


Why was she so angry? What had I done to make her feel angry towards me?17


As far as I was concerned I had done had done everything she had asked me, well almost everything eventually. That was better than not at all.18

I wondered how she would feel in my position. How embarrassed she would feel being perverted like this. For all and sundry to see. To gawk at, to laugh at, to gasp at. 19

“Now be a good little whore, and run along while I get things set up. You have fifteen minutes to be clean, and naked. I think I am being quiet fair letting yo have the comfort of a hot shower at least.”20

Taking a deep breath in. I fought back the tears, trying desperately not to show her any sign of weakness that she could use against me. Sighing I looked back towards my house, as she held out a pair of keys, and jangled them in front of my eyes.21

“Just think, I could do so many things to you, hurtful things. I could have you sent away, locked away for good. You know your parents would, especially if they new how much you craved to have no control, how you crave a woman's violent touch, you're a fucking masochist. You're parents would disown you.”22

I knew she was only hyping me up, trying to get me mad enough to snap, or worse tell the truth. It was the truth. They would disown me. They would send me away. 23

Yet she had triggered me once again, with the taste of her truth. I craved her touch, I craved the pain she would inflict on me, I craved her violation.24

I could see it in her eyes. She knew she had me, she had me wrapped around her little finger, and there was no way in hell I was going to deny her of this tainted pleasure. This way in which all my fantasy's would come true. She and only she could make them come alive, and make me feel like I wasn't alive at all.25

Snatching the keys from her hands, she pressed her body firmly against mine. Her nipping teeth dangerously close to my ear.26

“Now go, right now,” she purred, opening the passenger door.27

This time I did what she said. Her erecting purrs causing me to forget all about the humiliation she wanted me to face, and think nothing but the thoughts of a nice warm shower before she began to dominate me again.28

“GOOD WHORE,” she screamed, as I  moved away from her desirable body , and ran across the freshly cut lawn to my doorstep.29

I was a good whore, I was a good slut. I was hers, and only hers. She needed me as much as I needed her. I could feel the love, but wanted to taste the danger.30

Fumbling with the keys, I shoved them in the door. Twisting them fast.31

I had fifteen minutes, or more so Ten after the time it had taken me to get the lock in the door, and for the God damn door to open.32

I flung the door open, letting it thump loudly against the wall.33

I had probably made quiet an impact, with the sound I had created but I did not care in the slightest.34

Sprinting, I reached the bathroom door. Locking it safe once inside.35

“You're a dirty whore, you're her dirty whore,” I said to myself, half reassuring my place, and half turning myself on with the feeling of her thrusting into my tight ass still being there.36

Ripping my pants of, I felt my finger glide across the rim of my ass, sliding slowly up inside the hole.37

With my free hand I ran the shower, my finger pleasing my ass hole erotically, as I climbed into the shower. 38

The steamy hot water bathing all my tension,lapping at my curves, my breast, my arches. Washing all that filthiness away. 39

And for a few moments, as I let the stream consume me, my breathing become heavy and strong, the feeling of exploding heightening. My moans became louder, my chest became tighter. I pushed my finger deep inside my ass, and probed it further and further, deeper and deeper.40

I was cumming, Oh God how I was cumming.41

“Ahh....Ye....Yes....UH.... UHHH...ohhuuhhh FUCK...” I screamed, feeling the pleasure at its highest peak.42

“Hay bitch what the fuck are you doing in there,” I head a familiar voice question, there was anger in the voice, as the door flung open and she walked in wearing the most sexiest dress I had ever seen.43

“Cummming,” I winced, as the feeling was gone, and had been replaced with fear, and frustration. I had been so close.44

“You fucking little snitch,” she cried, her voice echoing sharply though the small bath room.45

I flinched as she open the shower door, her hand finding my wrist, as she wrenched me out of the shower, pushing me up against the shower wall.46

“Did I say you could cum slut?' she asked, her finger finding its way back inside my ass whole. I could feel her nails digging deep, almost as if she was trying to tear the skin. 47

I shook my head, feeling my arm being twisted behind my back, almost to breaking point. I heard my bones beginning to crack, and felt the tendons being stretched. As she latched something around both my wrist, pulling her coated finger out of my ass.48

“Answer me now you fucking disobedient little tramp,” She screamed, shoving her coated finger into my mouth, making me suck on my own ass juices. 49

I held back the fowl taste in my mouth, almost gagging as she rolled her finger around in my mouth, like she was brushing my teeth, and forced me to surrender to my mistakes.50

“I w..was... horny,” I choked back, my own saliva dripping thick down my chin and onto my chest.51

“Is that all you have to say for yourself you worthless piece of cunt? Why did you disobey me?”52

This time I had no idea what to say, I made it a reason to keep sucking. Pretending that I could not answer her; having her finger wedged between my teeth.53

She waited, impatiently as I continued to restrain for her question.54

“Alright, you want it like that you got it,” she said, pulling my arm just that little bit higher.”55

“Uhhh FUCK YOU,”I screamed,feeling something being torn in my arm.56

“No you fucking dog, fuck you... you make me fucking sick, and I am going to make you punish. You are a fucking shit slave, do you hear me. You're just a waste of fucking space whore, you can't even follow a simple instruction like having a shower, you betrayed my trust, and now you must pay.”57

She pulled me back from the shower wall, and open the door, throwing me back inside. Holding my head firmly to the chilling, tiled floor.58

“Move anymore than you need to and I will leave you hear for your parents to find you. Nod if you understand me.”59

I nodded, feeling her hand wrap around the back of me neck, as she pulled me up; unclasping the metal handcuffs from my twisted arms.60

“Stand underneath the shower and raise your arms together in the air, over the nosal,” she ordered, using her hands to part my legs. “And part these legs wider,” she hissed, her fingers scratching their way up and down my inner thigh, causing my skin to scar.61

“Yes mistress,” I said, holding my arms high above the shower nosal. Waiting for her further plan of action, and commands. 62

By now my arms felt like they had been wrenched and torn from my body. I could not even begin to wonder what she had planned to do next. Only hope that it did not include my arms being tortured more than that already had been.63

“SILENCE,” She purred,”From now On I do not want to hear a word, a peep, a sound, a moan, groan, growl or shriek. Do you understand me?”64

I felt my head moving, nodding. Trying to escape the fate I wanted. Trying to deny myself when I wanted to disobey her, I wanted to make her even more angry than she already was. I wanted to be a bad slave.65

I felt her hands finding my wrist. Hearing the familiar clicking sound of the handcuffs once again being attached, holding me in place underneath the shower.66

I looked down, her hand traveling from the tip of my hair, and over my breasts. I had not even remembered the nipple clamps that were so firmly attached. I was in so much pain, that I began to remember them once again, as she reminded me, just what it had been like out in the paddock.67

Gripping onto the clamps she pulled my nipples forwards. Her gaping mouth, smiling in glee, as I coiled backwards. Trying in vain not to scream, not to cry out unaware of what she might do to me if I tried.68

“Fuck you now dirty bitch, fuck you. You like that don't you, you like your nipples being fucking torn, you want me too pull some more whore?” she asked, not even waiting for my answer before pulling on them further. I felt like she was ripping them of.69

Choking on my scream I nodded. Acknowledging that she was serving only the best of pain.70

Laughing, echoing in her joy. She let go. Letting my stretched nipples fall back into place; before she squatted before my pussy. Grabbing some metal device from underneath her dress.71

Suddenly I felt the icy cold pain of it being attached to my pussy lips. It seemed as if what ever she had attached to me was stretching them further apart. With each movement, I felt my skin being ripped, I felt them being stretched further, and further beyond recognition. Until I was at the limits of releasing a mournful, agonizing scream. My cunt was her next biggest target.

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  • enchantress silver member
    October 28
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    hot, very hot. this got me going.
    keep up the good work Blair


  • Lonesome Dove
    October 20

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    Wow!! Again, I am pulled in to your story feeling the pleasure and the pain of each character. Not used to such harsh language (especially the "c" word) but understand it's part of her complete dominance. Very arousing. Looking for Part 3. *blushes again

  • mcfreeman
    July 7
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    now I'm hooked

  • wow. Her pain seems SO real i can almost feel it. I'm jealous of how well you can describe emotions and details hah!it was amazing though. I love how its a case of dominance and slavery. Its awesome

  • Gee!

    And then what happened? They live happily ever after? I mean, how much more can this kid take? Well, as the masochist said to the sadist:"Beat me, beat me!" And as the sadist replied:
    "No! Suffer!"
    You might have a career doing this stuff...apparently you've got the idea...question is is this what you really want to develop?
    If so...(even if not) you've got a few errors is spelling, etc. (Whole=hole...nosal=nozzle...etc.) Be careful. It'll lend a little more credibility to what you're doing.
    GA

  • Wow that was deep and painful, why did she make noise in the shower how silly!!!!

    Soo good but (: I loved this, though the other was better with more description and heart racing action.

    ly.
    xxx

  • Ouch! Oh my god those descriptions are so good I can almost feel the pain that's being inflicted. Damn you do such good details on things Blair! I can only imagine where this one goes to next!
    ~Joann

  • I am in pain when I read this!!!

    I'm not kidding, I have to check and see if I'm bleeding. It sounds soooo painful... and I feel bad for your main character, being humiliated like that. Although it was a bad idea for her to make noises while masterbating in the shower... that was a REALLY bad idea on her part. It just... it's so vivid. Just clean up some grammar and such and you are good to go.

  • Another riveting piece of erotica...it seems this is more violent and masochistic. There are several spelling mistakes here and there, but in revision, you will find them.

    Again, you have a knack for getting the emotions of the characters to show. Very well done. Looking forward to Part III.


  • xoxoSarah
    May 2
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    wt

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