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Multiple faces,
Glassy tangles,
Fixed together,
Pointed angles-2
A prism, I hold,
Gazing through
Sunset colors
And I see you.3
Three smiles, a frown,
A laugh, two sighs,
Loving you,
Your beautiful eyes.4
Here in my room,
Softly wonder,
The lights outside,
The rain and thunder-5
Welcome droplets,
Pattering, pattering,
Dreamland places,
Wandering, wandering.6
The diamonds above,
Sparkling down,
Here, right here,
In thoughts, I drown.7
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A contest entry
- Sing Me A Song by lexiconsthedevil.
130 points, ended June 13, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this imagery is so pretty. great job writing this. i also love the rhyme that you have going and the words that you chose
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that was great ive saerched through a lot of ppl and only two said i should finish this story may i have your advies
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wow i really liked the imagery in thisit was great!!! hope too see more of your work soon
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Too keep up with the trend I see, let me start off with...a 'wow'.
Wow, this was great Andrew! I really don't know what to say about this poem. The imagery was absolutely stunning, as it is with all of your work. I absolutely adored this part:
Three smiles, a frown,
A laugh, two sighs,
Loving you,
Your beautiful eyes.
Again, terrific job! -
Wow, Andrew. This is beautiful. I especially love the last two lines.
x Julez -
I loved this!
Wow... I truly enjoyed reading this (a few times actually). It's right up my alley. Very dreamy...seeing life through creative lenses...introspective...daydreamy...lovely sentiments...
What can I say? I always love your writing whenever I get to read a sample of it,(which, admittedly, hasn't been since last year, as I've been "away".)
You're truly talented and I love it.
Nice job on this one.
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