Jelly

and I itch to know the candy bowl side of you again. I want to reach in and pull out my favorite piece and make it last as long as I can bear without chewing it, it’s just that good. I want you to come out and play with me. I’m wrapped in your bittersweet finger and you crave your whole hand. Sometimes I wish we could enjoy the bittersweet together.1

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  • MysticalRayne
    April 2, 2008

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    This is very interesting , I loved the candy part and how you wove it all together nice piece my dear

  • a-crazed-hobo
    January 19, 2005
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    Definitely very unique. The structure is kind of odd, but I like it. It's so very realistic, and I read it as if I'm just walking into the door when you begin it. Nicely done.


  • My Precious
    January 18, 2005
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    Wow! This is fantastic! You should enter this in a contest and put it over in the Featured column! It is so fresh and original. Very creative stuff! Its a winner!