Liam And His Secret Love Part 7

Sara sensed the elf next to her and opened her eyes. She looked up at him and saw stunning blue eyes staring into her green ones. "Oh, hello. Did i interupt your thinking, sir?" she asked standing up. She had long red hair tied up in a braided tiara on her head and she was wearing her favorite dress. It had bell sleeves and was made of silk. It was black with a red belt around her waist, and her collar, sleeve edges, elbow ties, and dress hem where made of the same red. "No of course not. I just noticed you were here and had to come and meet you. What realm do you come from?" She knew he was slowly takineg in her appearance. "Oh, well i'm from Bella-Shar sir and my name is Sara Thornhill." She saw a look of surprise come over his flawless face, before he asked," So you are a mortal. You're not an elf?" She stared at him in shock. "No of course not. Why would you think i was. I'm the princess of Bella-Shar and i am totally human." He looked at her for a few minutes before answering her. "But you have the features of an elf except for the ears that is. I thought you must be an elf from a realm i haven't visited yet." He was staring at her with such intensity that she felt a little uncomfortable. She got up and said, "Well i'm a human and as far as i knwo there is no elves in my ancestry. By the way you never introduced yourself." He quickly got to his feet and said, "My name is Liam Greenleaf and i am the prince of the Wooded Realm. It is a pleasure to meet you Princess Sara Thornhill of Bella-Shar." He smiled as he finished and bowed to her. She returned his smile and said," Well, its a pleasure to meet you too, Prince Liam Greenleaf of The Wooded Realm." and she bowed to him.

Author notes

ok so its been awhile since i've posted more of this story. Sorry guys i've been kinda busy with school and stuff. i will post more soon. oh yeah i am going to start editing this soon. i've already got about 3 pages done but i havent put it on yet. tell me if you like it. also tell me what i can change to make it better. -caylierose

please tell me what you think. i want your honest opinion. thanxs.

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