||what awaits us||

1

Tick Tock chimes the clock
Keeping time it won’t stop.
Minutes here,
Seconds there,
Worthless in the end to those who care.2

Split splat heart attack
Spiders crawling up your back.
Death screams,
Envy sings,
Waiting on what hell will bring.3

Cling clang bells rang
Huckleberries, dew and rain.
Birds, bees,
God’s sweet things,
Whisper Heavens hidden beings.4


Author notes

To the rhythm of a childs poem my mom used to say to me when i was lil.

Big circle, little dot
Question mark hits the spot
Tight squeeze,
Cool breeze,
Now you’ve got the shiveries.

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  • Scaramouche.
    May 4, 2008

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    Wow.


    Bizarrely Amazing.
    I really like it.

    May I ask if I can use it on my page on a different site?
    Credit to you ofcourse


  • PorSiempre
    May 2, 2008

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    Hmm. The best word I can think of to describe it is quirky. I like it, though. Creepy and, I don't know, creepy. Good write/


  • NinjaMegami
    May 1, 2008

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    luvyas

    that was odd.....but i like odd...odd means original.....original means good.....good means great....great means brilliant...brilliant means marvelous...marvelous means perfect....perfect means exact...and so on...wow! i just made that all up! you gave me inspiration! THANKS!!!!! ^_~