Tender heart High ~ Mistress in the making~ Chapter Four- Safe

CHAPTER FOUR
 
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Once we had finished our Taco's, not having enough time for seconds; Ellie thought it would be best to leave now, and head back to school before the shit really hit the roof.1

We stood at the door. 2

Ellie Taking the last puff of her brothers cigarette before kissing him goodbye on the cheek.3

I thought it to be wrong myself how sexually affectionate they we towards each other.
 
Then yet again that was not as strange as having feelings for your new best friend.4

At least they had a prerogative, they were some kind of different people than I was. In some different league.5

Now as I watched her graze her cheek against his, I felt an overwhelming sense of jealousy erupting in the pit of my stomach. I hated watching her be so affectionate towards another person; And I did not even understand why. 6

What was I saying? Of course I understood why.
 
Her smooth, but sleazy brother was feeling her up like some kind of hooker on the street, someone out of his posy of strippers at his club.7

It was not like I had not understood what they were talking about. I was not that naive.8

Ellie pulled away, letting her arms fall to her side. Her lips parting away from her brothers cheek.9

“Colby come and say goodbye to Doug then aye,” she laughed, something had changed in her tone.
 
She was more dopey looking, all bar the fact that she was most likely high. Something was different, she was acting a little more slutty then I had ever expected her to.10

I shook my head, looking towards the open road towards the school. Hoping she would get the message. Luckily for both our sakes she did.11

Turning to Doug she let out a small cackle before strutting towards me. Her arm swinging roughly around my shoulder. I could smell the grog on her from a mile away.12

“It's okay bro, Colby's just a little frigid that's all,” she stammered, breathing heavily on my face. The repulsive smell wafting up my nose.13

Embarrassed by her comment I shook my head, watching as Doug recoiled into the club.14

“I'm not frigid,” I yelled,  hoping that he would hear my cry before the door closed behind him. Why I cared about his opinion I would never know. Though inside I felt like I almost had to become friends with the enemy, people not of my kind just so I could get closer to her, closer to Ellie.15

He raised his hand in the air. Making note that he has heard my comment. Though he did not bother to turn around, or smile, or let me know that despite what I had just told him, I really was frigid 16

Holding my hand firmly under Ellie arm, my fingertips touched the edge of her breast. Sending a jolt of arousal throughout my whole arm, and into my body.
 
I almost let her go, my eyes rolling frighteningly back into my head, as I felt something swell, and leak in my panties.17

Though in this time of urgency I had no time to toddle with stimulation, I would leave that for later on, when I was alone. When all I could think about was her, and not have to worry about a god damn person in sight telling me that what I felt was wrong.18

For now I was in charge. I was the one in charge of getting us back safe and sound. I knew this was going to be a challenge.

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Kinda warped pic... its mainly what I think Doug looks like ...

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  • TNTrouble
    October 3, 2008

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    Oh aye...in charge now. The fun begins ehhh... I love that bit of incest you snuck in there you bad girl.

  • uh

    I like it. It's the only thing in here, I could find, that was not adult


  • vampire of thought
    May 2, 2008

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    god, I feel like a crack addict. 'cept I'm addicted to this story!

    Its a wonderful story, and its going someplace. Trust me, I have no patience for stupid stories that are boring. Yours cuaght my attention.
    oh, and I think you mean "posse" not "posy".



    -twitchy


  • XxTattered WingsxX
    May 2, 2008

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    I'm sure that Ellie is extremely cute and all but if I were Colby and had just experience all that within the blink of an eye, I really think I would have to offer her my best wishes and part ways as quickly as I possibly good. Then again however, I am not the character so my personal opinion does not matter. Your imagery in this chapter I think faltered a bit from the previous chapters, but you developed your characters a bit more. It's obvious that she wants to fit in somewhere and do whatever she can to get closer to her newly aquainted friend. I'm anxious to read what happens next. I'm waiting for things to get a bit... heated! =p

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Glowstarcharmer
    May 2, 2008

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    This chapter was shorter but it was still really good. It showed how Colby has a real desire to fit in and in some ways it seems like she is lonely. I feel sorry for her that she feels like she has to hide her feelings for the girl she loves. Knowing you though I dont suppose they are gonna stay hidden for much longer, lol. I cant wait to read the next chapter and i really hope she can come out about her feelings.

    X Amber X

  • V l
    May 1, 2008
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    I gree this guy is hot and this story was another master peace my little vampire queen.


  • VanityAngst
    May 1, 2008

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    okay, that guy is gorgeous!
    feelings for your friend? that sucks.Jealousy? thats even worse. SO was this like an insest thing


  • Hismercy
    May 1, 2008

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    This was pretty good set-up for chapter four !

    This chapter was clean, yet had a hint of erotica and teasing, yet the story did move forward showing feelings and fact of the situation, I myself can't wait until your ready to release chapter 5 ! until then, im not going to take a little nap , yet just stay alive and to prepare myself of your next stories that are ahead.

    Awesome job once again Prodigious !

    -Hismercy

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

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