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Fang, Iggy, Nudge, The Gasman, Angel and I ran 20 metres, then jumped into the crystal blue sky. We unfolded our wings and soured up and up and up. I don't know how fast I was, but I knew I just broke my record. I think I was flying at about 330 miles per hour. Anyway, we looked down upon New York city and we saw a new explosion.1
I'll tell you what happened. We were under attack of Itex. The new and improved bodyguards lunged at us. But we held on. Then Gazzy found he had his bomb in... well you don't want to know. Except we didn't have a timer so we ran outside. 2
And here we are. When we were flying up, Gazzy dropped the bomb. Uhoh. We are not out of trouble yet. The old experiment, The flyboys, are chasing us. Again!!!3
And we need help. Again!!! Guess what. You know we were on a mission to stop Global warming. Well we're not doing great. I have to admit Fang's blog helped us a bit. Apart from he met this girl and he fancies her. I'm still quite anoyed. But I'll show him that I can cope.4
I have to say, Fang is really good with girls.
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By Maximum
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I love Maximum Ride, and you must too!
I love how you captured each of their personalities from reading the books and I really liked this!
I think Max and Fang should get together! hehe... (i like the last sentence!) -
lolz. I like that last setence.
It's kinda a weird, but likeable, story. I like the way you write. you should consider writing more extensive piece. I would deffinently read it.
Great job. ^_^
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