The nervousness started going away.1
I knew I still had to be2
very cautious around him.3
We were on our way.4
The rain had started up again,5
but it wasn't a heavy rain.6
Cynthia: "So, what are you doing7
out here in the middle of 8
nowhere in a storm?"9
Tony: "I was at a friend's house."10
Cynthia: "So, what happened?"11
Tony: "We got into a big fight12
and I left."13
Cynthia: "I see you are upset.14
I won't ask you anymore15
questions."16
Tony: "No, that's okay, I don't mind."17
Cynthia: "Are you sure?"18
Tony: "Yeah, I'm sure."19
Cynthia: "So, why did you20
get into a fight?"21
Tony: "He broke up my22
relationship with a girl."23
Cynthia: "I'm sorry to hear about that."24
Tony: "Nah, it's okay.25
I knew it wouldn't26
last anyway."27
Cynthia: "I'll change the subject."28
Tony: "What about you?29
Why are you out in the30
middle of nowhere?"31
Cynthia: "I'm just getting back32
from a party."33
The rain was coming down harder34
and the highway was35
getting hard to see.36
Tony: "Where are you headed?"37
Cynthia: "Back to Massachusettes."38
Tony: "Funny, I'm headed there too."39
Cynthia: "Have you lived there long?"40
Tony: "Only for a year or so."41
Author notes
Chapter 7 coming right up. I hope this story isn't boring.
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Comments
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Starting at Chapter 6 makes me want to go back and read 1-5 to see what is actually going on. I see you are writing this more as play rather than actually story. Maybe a future as a playwrite for you someday. I did not find this boring at all, but I must read 1-5 to find out what's going on.
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