How to make you funny?

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How To Make You Funny?2

How to make you funny3

And you are always funny4

You hide it and5

It is still funny6

And that makes me laugh?7

How to make you serious8

And you can not be serious9

Funny is funny10

And being seriously funny is not that funny11

And you laugh?12

How to tell you a joke13

And you are the funniest joke14

That makes you more funny and serious15

While you are drinking and thinking16

At the risk17

Of spilling the juice of your lips18

At my laugh?19

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  • Brian Balzer
    November 11, 2008
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    That's seriously funny

    I thought I'd commented on this. I think I must have read it before I had a membership? I like the way you listed everything. I think the question marks seem out of place and I'm not a fan of all the ands but I really love the last four lines. I had to read it more than once to get the simple meaning of it. They will spew juice at the fact that you're laughing. Very Funny.

  • rhetorica
    October 9, 2008

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    its nearly brilliant,i think the last four lines are too profound for the rest of the poem.Funny is funny and being seriously funny is not that funny are great lines.Also,can and not should read cannot,unless you did that intentionally.well done.


  • sandancer
    April 29, 2008
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    its cool