[♥ She wished upon a star♥]

Once upon a time1

She wished upon a star2

Her eyes closed shut3

Her hands clasped tight4

All she wanted5

Was someone to love6

Someone7

Who loved her8

Someone who would be there9

When she needed him10

She sat below the dark night sky11

Hoping, wishing for the day12

Love would go her way13

A love that will last forever14

Was right in front of her 15

His eyes, his smile16

She has yet to see17

His voice, his laughter18

She has yet to hear19

But somehow she feels a connection20

A feeling of belonging21

His words 22

Sooth the loneliness23

She had felt for so long24

Was there a chance25

If she willed it so26

To see this mans face27

To gaze upon him28

Feel his presence near her29

To feel instead of imagine30

To whisper in his ear31

To tell him how she loves him32

Does she dare dream of the day33

When she can give her heart away34

She looked at the beautiful night sky 35

And wished upon a star36

Hoping for the day their eyes can meet 37

And she can truly38

Be happy39

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  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    April 30, 2008

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    Awww this is so sweet and written with such love behind it. I know the feeling of wanting a real true love, yet it seems impossible to find. Beautifully written piece of work here so glad I came to read it
    ~Joann


  • asthray.heart
    April 29, 2008

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    This reminds me of the song Satine sings in the Elephant before Christian comes up haha.
    Very sweet, insight into rele wanting some love but not getting it.

    Keep up sweety this was pritty.

    ily
    xxxx