I like it when u bite my ear" I say my hot warm breath trailing down your neck, and back towards your shoulder blades... I drape your hair behind your shoulders, lapping a line across the shoulder blades, butterfly kisses before I bite my way back up towards your ear.1
Ahhh.." u moan loudly, biting my lip as well; gritting your teeth from my sensual nibbles. "Gosh..yess...that..." 2
As I drag my teeth back down your slender neck. My hands find their way underneath my shirt.. I cup my warm firm breast in my hand. My cold biting hands, sending a feeling of erotic chills down your spine. Slowly, I begin to caress needing your breast in my hands. Firmly I move towards your hot, stiff nipples and pinch them, rubbing them between my fingertips, sensually as I bring My teeth to your lips, licking them, before digging My teeth softly into my juicy flesh.3
Ahhh...." you moan unable to control my hands when I grip your ass, unable to resist I push my lips farther into your mouth. Craving your touch, I move forward a bit,thrusting my crotch into yours, turning and shivering as I devour your nipples between my fingers, breathing lightly.4
"God your soo...haaa..." you moan 5
"God I'm so what," I moan" unzipping your pants, moving with me to the edge of the desk.... "6
HOT.....Am I sooo Hoooornny" u groan, as I unbutton your skirt, pulling me in for a provokingly powerful kiss. Our tongues swirling, dancing, massaging in our mouths as our hot saliva collides, creating a sweet, but devilish taste. Corrupting our senses.
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HOT HOT HOT! You create such steamy, erotic images with your words. You are truly a gifted writer. Teasing your reader, you pull them into your story where they get lost in the desire, not wanting it to end.
I was a bit confused with the who's touching who, but honestly, it didn't matter. I just didn't want it to end.
Excellent write.
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BRAVO
I LOVE ALL THE DETAIL AND EVERYTHING. IT IS AMAZING JUST TO BE THE BEGINNING OF THE STORY. I HOPE TO READ THE REST SOON. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
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Oh god now this one really turned me on! Wow thats... Oh my... Biting is actually a major turn on for me, always has been and this is... Hot! Hot! Hot! Damn this one is like the best I have read so far of your new lesbian writes. It is one smoking erotically charged story! Those descriptions were... whew... All I can say is you are so good with this!
~Joann
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Prodigious.Mirth
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you sure can write a HOT read in so few words... More to come, yes? :-) -
I got slightly confused through most of it. I don't understand if she was touching herself or the other girl and vise versa. Nonetheless, that was a very good read, a very hot read! Biting is such a turn on! Whew! lol Your imagery is absoultely breath taking. You have such a wonderful way with words. you put so much effort and time into your stories. Um, I think you meant to put kneading instead of needing. -shrugs- Just saying... good job!
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"My hands find their way underneath my shirt.. I cup my warm firm breast in my hand. My cold biting hands, sending a feeling of erotic chills down your spine. Slowly, I begin to caress needing your breast in my hands."
so wait, is she touching herself or the other girl lol
other than that, oooh
hehe
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corrupting our senses, thats so hot...
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Oh, this was absolutely a really hot write, Blair. I enjoyed thsi because it was full of steam, pretty well written--with a few mistakes, though--and I also enjoyed that you worded it well and you know how I can sometimes like some girl-on-girl in my particular moods.
Keep up the great work. I enjoyed this and hope you continue this as a longer story, because it screams the want for being longer and more graphic.
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