(I Have a Secret)


moon dust
a pile of a thousand stars
covering up my hand like a sky of silver diamonds
i blow on my secret with a tiny breath
and the tiny stars take a tiny leap into the air
all swirling and dancing around like each one is a ballerina
with a tutu made of smiles

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*sarah*
*freedom*
*picture-inspired*

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if you catch enough moon dust, you might just become a moon girl (:

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  • Dreams of Insanity
    April 29, 2008

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    Wooooooow....
    I really liked this!
    It just has this quality that made me hooked!
    SUPER GOOD!!!

  • trackrunnengirl24
    April 28, 2008

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    lol i liked it... although it was a little confusing, because everything was described, not explained. bot u shouldnt really change it, i actually like it the way it is


  • always feel pretty
    April 28, 2008
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    OMG. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. It was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Amazing. Jeez. It brought tears to my eyes.

    And this made me smile, "if you catch enough moon dust, you might just become a moon girl (:"



    amazing. seriously.

    ericaxoxo

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