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My eyes slowly wake open, the man beside me will be my husband today, we have known each other way to long-and still I can't believe today is the day.3
I told myself over and over that I would share of my darkest passion and my freakiest fears....yet day by day goes by, sometimes slow and sometimes way to quick ! I say this will be the day I share of my freakiness. 4
Yet day by day, and soon month by month I say I will share of my passion tonight, with my thirsty fangs that are so hungry and bright, yet the sense of his raw meat turns me away and my thoughts just turn into another day to share of my story and soon the hands that will pull me to the ground because of my want and haunt.5
My dreams make me scream in haunt because of my mate who is sound asleep doesnt even know the pain that I live and even want to share.6
My deepest desire is to sink my teeth unto that hunky skin as we passionatly make love and scream with pleasure.7
The scream that I want to give is much different than his, yet I have to put those thoughts away because today I have to prepare for my weddng day .8
-Hismercy9
Author notes
Share whats on your heart as I did with mine.
A contest entry
- Fangs and Claws- Prompts Galore! PIF! by Friesian.
375 points, ended May 14, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
to eat or not to eat
Comments
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O.o Sweet!
Oh, I adored this! The words were so powerful and yet so, so very dark! It was deep abd delicious! It went PERFECTlY along with the pic! Excellent job! I enjoyed every bit of this!
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a fun contest !
Rock on friesian ! This is one of those stories that just flew out of my fingertips and was a pleasure to write !
I appreciate that you enjoyed everything, as it was a great opportunity to share an awesome story to this contest full of ideas and pics to choose from !
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Hmm... Can't tell if this is vampiric or just sadistic... But I like it in any way =D Went well with the picture, and it was well written =)
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Thanks Drac !
I'm not going to share if it is eather vampiric or sadistic (or maybe both)
Yet I will tell you that I am honored that you stopped by to read as well as made a comment !
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WHoa.. I never new you had it in you to wrote something so dark and tasty ..I mean I know your a talented writer but that as very well done... I think you worked well with the picture XD I like it a lott...
Im not good with grammar or spelling so XD its all good
Love Blair
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Prodigious, Thank you so much for your comment !
To tell a lie...or maybe its the truth (just kidding)...eather way I do write the dark and tasty stuff,yet very rarely do I post these delicious things. ( I find it makes the reader hunger for more)
Thanks again Prodigious for the compliment that went along with the pic....and the schools should expell grammer from todays society.
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Hmm, interesting. So she had a craving for flesh. It seems strange that she has not told him before, perhaps she was scared that he would leave her. But now she has to tell him. I thought this was nicely detailed and i could 'see' the scene as I read it. A few grammatical errors, lol, but we all have them. A good read. Well Done. Kais =)
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Empress, thanks for stopping by and giving me your honesty, I love how you shared on your input of what you think of this story !
I'm glad you were able to follow through the story, as I know as a reader with some stories it can be challenging.
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