She had her pinned against a wall of nails

 
 
 
 
 
She had her pinned against a wall of nails
She dared no move, and dared not betray her mistress's commands
Her fingers tied in little chains, as were her toes
Spread as far as her body could stretch
Her legs in which her mistress had probes apart, stood vacant
Like an exit, or entry just waiting to be violated
Consuming, almost in a desirable state, she kept her lips shut tight
Watching the constant flickering of the light on the roof
It's constant sparks making the whole scene much more intense than she had ever expected
Standing with a probing pinwheel in her hand, her hooded mistress inserted one finger into her swollen,beaten pussy checking for any signs of early arousal
Before edging forwards, towards the strings which held her lips open wide1

Breathing heavily, not being able to scream she took a deep breath in
Feeling the cold, heavy sickly feeling of her skin being grated against
The cruel, but loving hand of her mistress's guiding her into a pleasured state
Using her tormented attraction as means for survival she tried to speak
Her voice constraint with rings that pulled her cheeks in every direction
Her own panties being used as a gag, a prop to keep her silent
The very same panties her mistress's had made sure were soaking before she had even began to move the torture forward2

Slowly put surely she felt the wetness inside evolve to higher levels
As her mistress's misused her pussy for her own gratification
Her fingernails scratching at her her insides, causing her slaves juices to become heavier and thick
Slowly, like cream, she began to drip
The sappy liquid of a session at its highest peak of potential, exceeded to cause the slave to buckle under the climax of the metal being rotated teasingly across her clit3

Her body uncontrollably spasmed, as her mistress's bit hard on her neck
Her fingers almost like heaven as they glazed the glistening mess
What an achievement on her behalf
She has consumed her slaves potential
Exhilarating, as she watched her slaves body being pressed into the needles
Very lightly pricking her skin
Her orgasm was arising, her nipples clamped
Being tampered with leavers that were attached to the roof4

Taking the wheel from her pussy
The mistress's grabbed a flogger from a side table that's stood before her slave
She watched in utter sadistic pleasure as her slaves eyes widened
Her pussy behind pulled and stretch as far as it would go
Her finger, and toes being pricked further into the nails
Her nipples being stretched back and forth
Under the control of a special red button that could stop it all
Though she was almost done
The mistress's grew heavy in contentment as she raised the flogger high into the air
Cracking it one last time against the table
Before fervently slashing it across her slaves vulnerable, cream covered clit
Driving her into her tortured orgasm

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  • Lonesome Dove
    December 21, 2008

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    Wow, such imagery. I can feel the pain, stretching, pulling. Fantastic bit of work here. You definately have the knack for erotic writing. I am not worthy


  • Redtearstains
    June 16, 2008

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    Simply divine. Sexy, torture in its rawest form. The imagery is excellent the the scene you have created is one so vivid I almost felt the pain and pleasure myself.
    It was an honour to have read

    Peace


  • asthray.heart
    April 29, 2008

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    I read this but couldn't comment, the library computer wouldn't let me. Ver' painful sounding again, how toturedly erotic.

    yet again I like the lesbian side of this, you should keep it up no matter how painful it gets to see the image of erotic torture.

    ily


  • secretladyspider
    April 28, 2008

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    You make it sound soooo painful!

    I am not going to lie... it makes me HURT. I don't really know what else to say, except that it seems like a lot of what you write about is really pornographic... not neccesarily bad. Just a few grammar things here and there, that's it.

  • V l
    April 28, 2008
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    Very very intesnce and wonderful and ertica.


  • Fizbop
    April 28, 2008
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    intesnce as heck veyr wonderful. this is rally intresting. very nicely done. and very wonderful.


  • Glowstarcharmer
    April 28, 2008

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    Wow! Intense! It was very... intersting shall we say to read. Due to a bit of a crisis last night (dont ask!) my planned evening with my partner didnt happen so Iv been left feeling rather unsatisfied and in the mood for something a bit rougher, so this was just what I wanted to read. (Sorry, was that too much information? lol) Im not into being physically injured to this extent myself, at least not in that department, but it is fun to read sometimes. This had a deliciously dark feel to it but it still came across that the mistriss loved her slave and was getting pleasure from bringing her to new hights. It was amazingly well written my love, I wish I had as devious a mind as yours so that my writing could oneday be this good. lol.

    X Amber X

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