[ there's gonna come a time ]

there's gonna come a time
in the blinking of an eye
that i'm not gonna be me
your not gonna be you1

there's gonna be a time
in the blinking of and eye
that your gonna leave me
and find some other guy2

you're not gonna be me
you're gonna be you3

and there gonna be time
that your gonna make me cry
and wish that i could take back
the blinking of that eye4

and just go blind
so i wouldn't see you
leave me behind5

why do you do the things you do
i think i'm gonna stage a coup
and watch the years go by
in the blinking of an eye6

well now i'm getting old
and my sights getting fuzzy
i wonder what happened to you
as the years went by
in the blinking of an eye

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  • Rachel Westwood gold member
    April 29

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    I really like this one... There's a strong sense of sorrow and a little hint of nostalgia running through it. Made me feel a little sad at the end; I think it was the repetition of the line 'in the blinking of an eye' that did it. rhythm is good, ryhme is good. Well done.