Secret Radio Murders - Chapter 13


They had never worked together before and Joe Farley was pleased with how good a team they made. The young sergeant was a pleasant surprise. Brad Benson still maintained a youthful warrior image of himself, but it wasn’t just an ego trip. He worked hard, possessed an open mind willing to accept Farley’s ideas, but also had the self-confidence to express his own opinions.1

After they’d spent a couple of hours debriefing Hayes and Hamlin on the Crisis Center crew, they set the detectives on the next stage of interviews. The volunteers who’d been on duty the night Michelle called and were missing from work that morning. One in particular, who took Michelle’s call and found nothing in the woman’s responses to warrant immediate intervention. This fellow claimed in a previous statement that Michelle wasn’t unusually upset and had even joked a bit before they rang off.2

There were also several dozen others who worked the phones over the six-month period that the other women died. Many of those had changed shifts or stopped volunteering. Since the radio station and crisis line provided caller ID printouts, it became a matter of cross-referencing the calls to locate those from the Crisis Center who connected to KJAB and Dr. Harris's program. Mainly a job for a good programmer and they had that in Cody.3

They’d done a rundown of what Cody’s reports gave them so far, and made notes on the calls Tomanio provided throughout the day concerning Hal Goodwin’s activities. Farley called in a man from his own precinct to relieve Tamanio and shadow Goodwin until he retired for the night.4

When the two sergeants finally called it a day at a little before six in the evening. Joe Farley contemplated inviting Brad Benson to join him for a meal at Mallory’s.5

“I’ll have your shirt washed,” Benson said. “Bring it back tomorrow.”6

“No hurry. Where you heading?” Joe asked.7

“Home. It’s time for my daily lecture on nine to five job availability.” 8

Of course, Brad was married. Farley hadn’t considered that. Marriage, a home, family activities, these were things he’d lost so he had stopped taking them into account. “I think we should personally interview Mark Gheil.” He changed the subject.9

“Good idea. We’ll confront him at his office tomorrow.”10

“Right.” He fiddled a while longer at his desk with unnecessary tasks while Benson left. Farley preferred to exit alone, not part ways in a parking lot. So at ten past six Farley headed for a cold beer and solitary supper at Mallory’s Pub.11

In the parking lot he paused to inspect several fresh rust spots on the trunk of his car. New York winters could play havoc with even the best factory paint jobs he thought as he rubbed at one. Even an Impala couldn’t take seven winters without becoming a bit pocked marked. He might better talk to his garage about some kind of a touchup before they got worse. A new car was out of the question. He still owed three more years of payments on the SUV Rose took in the divorce settlement. She was supposed to make the payments, she never had the money and he’d signed the contract, so to protect his credit he paid. 12

He no sooner opened the car door than his cell phone sang. He fished it out of his pocket as he slid into the seat. “Daddy, it’s me.” And a smile broke on his mouth.13

“And sure now, who’s me?”14

“Daddy…really how many kids call you daddy?” Becca’s adolescent giggle sounded in his ear. “I miss you sooo much. Only two more weeks of school.”15

“Neat baby. I miss you twice as much.”16

“No you don’t.” He could picture the pout. She had the cutest darn pout. “If you did, you’d come see me.”17

“Honey I would in a minute but I’ve got to work. Somebody has to work or we won’t eat.”18

“Mommy’s got a job now. She’s gonna make lots of money. She said when she saves enough… she’ll buy me a ticket so I can fly to see you. Why won’t you buy me a ticket Daddy?”19

‘Rose, you lying bitch’. He tried to mask the anger so his child wouldn’t hear it in his voice. “Mommy and I have been talking about just that. Maybe before you go back to school…”20

“Mommy said she asked you for money. She said you told her you don’t have it. Don’t you want me?”21

“Becca…don’t ever think that.” ‘Oh God, if only it was up to me, baby.’ He couldn’t tell her the truth. He couldn’t make her angry with her mother.22

“I want to see you Daddy.” He could hear her soft crying and felt a pain in his chest. Rose wanted money all right but it wasn’t for a plane ticket for their daughter.23

“Believe me baby before you go back to school, you’ll come here for awhile—the judge said so. If I have to I’ll come get you myself.”24

“Mommy wants to talk now.”25

Joe could hear his ex-wife’s voice coaxing his daughter to give up the phone. When Becca said, “bye Daddy,” he pushed the end button. Then put the phone on vibrate so he could screen his calls. He couldn’t chance what he’d say to Rose.26

Grateful the car’s air conditioner still worked, he sat at the edge of the parking lot, wasting gas as he waited to pull into the heavy New York traffic. Although he only had to travel a few blocks to reach Mallory’s he always moved his car out of the station’s lot. He hated having his car sitting in plain view advertising to his peers; Joe Farley had nowhere to go.27

He caught three red lights and groaned to himself that he could have gotten there faster on foot. 28

The bartender was just returning from the phone as Farley stepped inside. He paused at the beginning of the long mahogany bar and waited until Farley reached him. “You had a call,” he said. “I didn’t know your cell number, so I had him leave his.”29

“Sounds bad when a guy starts getting calls at the local pub.” Farley grinned as he reached for note the bartender held out. He scanned it and said, “Doesn’t ring a bell.” He shoved it in a pants’ pocket. .“How’s it going Matt?”30

“So, so, what can I get you?”31

Farley started to say,’the usual’ then caught himself. He hated for people to assume anything about him was habit. “Let me have a Paddy’s straight up, water on the side.”32

“Into the heavy stuff,” Matt said as he moved back behind the bar. He stopped and looked up at the gleaming glass bottles. His hand quickly claimed the proper one without hesitating. 33

Before he had a chance to pour, Farley said, “Changed my mind…just give me a Coors lite. Sandy’s night off?”34

Matt glanced up at wall clock. “She had something to do…She’ll be in at eight.”35

Joe motioned to two entering warriors. But it was a curt nod that didn’t invite companionship and the uniforms stopped at the bar while Joe carried his drink to a table. He thought about ordering a meal; not being all that hungry, he opted to wait for the waitress’s arrival. 36

Farley positioned his chair so he got a better view of the TV screen and propped his feet on the on the adjoining chair. The ball game was scoreless at the top of the third. He watched Pettitte, the Yankee Ace, blow a fast ball past the opposing hitter for a called third strike. 37

The warriors at the bar loudly expressed their pleasure, and a flash of memory made Joe feel depressed. How many times he’d been forced to abandon a good-natured male get together for family duty and he begrudged it…now he’d welcome it. 38

At bottom of the sixth, Sandy entered to a loud chorus of greetings mingled with groans of displeasure, for a Yankee hitter had smacked the first pitch back to the mound.39

She stopped at Joe’s table. Her black nylon uniform seemed to be getting shorter and tighter of late, or else Joe thought with grin, 'I’m just noticing what’s beneath it more.'40

Placing both hands on the table, Sandy leaned forward and blew Joe an airborne kiss before she said, “You eat yet?”41

“Kind of got engrossed in the game. Andy’s pitching a beaut—now if they’d get him a few runs…Neil?” 42

Doctor Neil Harris loomed up behind Sandy. “Caught Sandy coming out of the subway. Gave her a lift.” He yanked the opposite chair causing Joe’s feet to fall. He wiped it of with his hand before he sat.43

Joe scurried up in his seat. “You’re a couple hours early,” he said rocking his chair back.44

“My show doesn’t air tonight. I had a taste for a boiled dinner, how about you?“ When Joe nodded, Neil finished with, “Bring some harps with my corn beef Sandy. And an extra mound of horseradish.”45

“Depends…” Sandy drew the word out. “When are you going to take me on your yacht? Did you know he has boat, Joe?” Only Farley, mesmerized by the action on the TV, didn’t answer.46

Johnny Damon had drawn a walk. He was stuck on first base as the next two hitters popped out. Then Bobby Abreu singled and Damon’s speedy legs carried him to third. Alex Rodriguez took a hitter’s stance.47

Neil said, “Honey, I'd be happy to take you out most any weekend."48

"What about this weekend?" Sandy’s lips turned up in a brazen pout. “Or not.” She shrugged.49

"Should we invite Joe to come along?"50

"Two eligible men. How could a girl beat that?" Her blue eyes sparkled as she said, "Are you serious or teasing?”51

"Serious… indeed I am," said Neil. "But you’d better feed us. Joe looks famished.” Sandy danced away. The room erupted with loud cheers.52

“Yes!” Joe yelled. The screen flashed with ‘Home run’ and Johnny Damon and Bobby Abreu were headed home from first and third while A-Rod tossed the bat and started the all base jog to the screams of the Yankee fans. Joe smacked the table and declared, “Now Andy’s got some leeway.”53

Neil waited until the noise subsided before he asked, "Any plans this Saturday?"54

"What do you have in mind?" 55

"I've invited Sandy to go sailing with us."56

Joe took a deep drink of beer and shook his head. "Are you sure it's a good idea? You’re not entertaining any notions, she’s just a kid."57

“Nature tends to disagree with you.” Neil grinned. "No notions from this end. Anyway she has a thing for you. We can go for a short trip. Maybe up the coast. I don't think it will cause any problems so long as you behave." 58

"I hope you’re right," said Joe. “Sandy’s a cute kid. I mean…it’s just…what is she twenty six, maybe.” He hesitated. “I don't want to start another relationship.”59

"Well this little trip will probably not drastically change things."60

Sandy headed towards their table with a full tray. As she set about serving the heaping plates of corn beef, boiled cabbage, potatoes and carrots, she frowned at their serious faces. When they said nothing, she snapped, “Do we go sailing or not?"61

The guys grinned. Joe answered, "How's Saturday, if the weather is good?"62

And her frown faded into an appealing smile. “That's great. What time shall I be ready?"63

"Pick you up at seven?" Neil said.64

"Fantastic! I think I love you two. Joe, can I get you another beer?"65

"Yes, thanks." Joe ran his hand across his pocket and felt the paper with the phone number. He drew it out and laid it on the table. 66

“Well, well, you already got her phone number?” Neil laughed and clipped Joe’s forehead with the edge of his palm. 67

“Phone number?” Joe grunted. 'Sometimes Neil could act like an ass'. “Oh…this?” He realized what Neil had noticed and then assumed. “Some guy left his number for me here. Must be someone who comes in the place probably thinks I can fix a ticket.” 68

Neil lifted the note. “Wait a minute.” He scanned the number. “This is Mark Gheil’s cell phone number.”

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  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    July 26
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    Great

    Some after office activity for the two officials. Hopr this girl doesn't become a victim of the killer.

    • Hi!

      Our killer's a pretty dangerous fellow and he doesn't like certain types of women. We're happy you're reading us and we appreciate all the applause.

      Andy

  • Marta gold member
    June 16
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    A smooth chapter,uneventful but interesting.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

    • Well,

      It doesn't seem realistic that every day would be eventful. I'm glad it held your interest.

      Andy

  • graybeard silver member
    May 10

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    Mark Gheil. I'm beginning to think that maybe he's a red herring. He's just too convenient a suspect.

    • Hmm?

      You don't like Mark Gheil for the perp? Well, I've got nothing to tell you at this point. I wouldn't want to ruin the story for you.

      We're glad you're reading us. Thanks for all the applause.

      Andy


  • IrishYndina Greeters member
    December 13, 2008

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    Consider yourself hO.Odwinked!

    I figured I'd mix business with pleasure, and pick up a great story while also hO.Odwinking a great author. I know that it's been too long when I have to scan through several chapters to figure out where I left off. *laughs* Well, I'm back, and as editorial as ever. *brandishes her red pen*

    This is a good chapter - I like that you're drawing heavily on the relationships in this part, both with Joe's daughter and with Sandy, not to mention how you've outlined the efficiency of the police team. It almost makes me surprised that they haven't figured out the killer yet - except that it seems they're on all the wrong tracks. *laughs*

    As always, some notes:

    * Para 3: "The volunteers who’d been on duty the night Michelle called and were missing from work that morning. One in particular, who took Michelle’s call and found nothing in the woman’s responses to warrant immediate intervention." Neither of these are complete sentences. Personally, I would make the first sentence part of the previous sentence by combining them with a colon. The second setence you could make complete by changing "One in particular" to "There was one volunteer of particular interest". What do you think?

    * Para 12: "Farley preferred to exit alone, not part ways in a parking lot." Really? That's interesting...why? He must have a reason, eh? A bit of a chance to heighten his characterization, right?

    * Para 13: "He might better" - You don't need the word might here - I think it's a colloquialism because it threw me for a loop. And I hate how winters make such a rusty mess of cars - it's all the salt and sand they put on the roads. *sigh* Also, I think you need a "but" in the last sentence, between "make the payments" and "she never had."

    * Para 27: I think you need to capitalize "Bye".

    * Para 31: You have an extra period before "How's it going".

    * Para 37: I'm not quite sure what you mean by "warriors" in this context. *scratches her head* Maybe it's all the fantasy I read, but I'm picturing a couple of bulky men in furs, carrying battle axes.

    * Para 41: I would end the second sentence at "tighter of late" then make the rest a new sentence, like so: 'Or else,' Joe thought with a grin, 'I'm just noticing what's beneath it more.'

    * Para 42: I'm having a hard time picturing her blowing a kiss when both hands are on the table - usually blowing a kiss requires kissing your hand and blowing the kiss toward someone else.

    * Para 46: Isn't Harps capitalized? It's a brand name, I think.

    * Para 60: "what is she, twenty-six" needs both the comma and the hyphen I've added.

    * Nice hook at the end.

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      December 13, 2008
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      Thanks

      Thanks for coming back to the story and also for hoodwinking. I'll have to look over all the red marks. Thanks for editing.

      I like being called a great author. I hope that proves true at some point. You are a great editor.

      Thanks for reading and pointing out our mistakes.

      Andy


  • requiempoet
    May 7, 2008

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    Good job Daddy! I'm sorry I haven't been the best Kitten daughter as of late but your work is still very flawless. Love you!!

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      May 7, 2008
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      Thank Rosita.

      I haven't been a very good Daddy either. I haven't read any of your writes in a long time. Here you come reading mine. Makes me feel a bit guilty. I'll try to get over to read some of yours today.

      Andy


  • Amicus2K9
    April 29, 2008

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    Baseball, A-Rod & all...

    ...I usually avoid references that date a piece, but his fits in so well with the laid back style and the whole thing is, to me at least, reminiscent of Mike Hammer or Mickey Spillane that I used to read.

    Good chapter, reads well and easy...good things...now for a sour note....ahem...

    You 'humanized', made more human your hero, perhaps gave him a flaw with the scene with the daughter and the Ex and the suppressed anger and pain, not sure I like that very much. Ahm, how to say...I tried not to let a similar circumstance enter my stories even though it seemed a natural way to vent...I may be way off base here, my apologies if so.

    P44 L3 'of' = 'off'

    regards...


    amicus...


    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      April 29, 2008
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      Thanks Amicus

      Thanks for pointing out the error. Geri added the problems with the ex-wife and daughter and I rather like it. I like the subplot she has developed between Joe and his ex-wife and daughter.

      We're going to have several subplots going in this story. Hopefully, it will make the story as a whole more enjoyable.

      No need to apologize, I'm just pleased that you are reading.

      Thanks for reading and commenting. You are appreciated.

      Andy


  • Fizbop
    April 28, 2008

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    Very intresting addition very well worded and a nice flow to it. Keeps me wating to read more. Very nice job.

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      April 28, 2008
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      Thanks Fizbop

      I'm very glad that you are enjoying this story. It's good that you want to read more. Thanks for reading, commenting, and all the applause.

      How are you today?

      Andy

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