Tom sat up quickly, sniffing the air with one nostril.1
"Does any one else smell that," he said, rolling over onto his knee's and picking himself up.2
Shannon and Joe lied beneath him, staring into the partially blocked sky. Ross sat up next to Tom, picking something from his finger nail. He stopped, sniffing the air too.3
"Toms right," He said taking several more sniffs. "Some one's using a... you know, grill." 4
Tom snorted.5
"A you know like a grill," He said, letting his jaw hang low.6
Ross went to hit Tom only to end up rolling onto his back like Shannon and Joe. Tom gave him a small jab in the ribs before saying: "Common guys I'm starving."7
"Looks like someone has a case of the munchies," said Ross, opening his eyes with his fingers and dropping in eye drops.8
He twitched but then blinked it in. He handed them to Tom who put them in more gracefully. Ross finally stood up only to roll back over.9
"You know Tom, I would go but these leafs really are good for my back."10
Tom went to give Ross another jab only to have his foot apprehended and him fall back on his ass. Tom didn't abject the help down. He laid back down, fiddling with the dead twigs of a near by tree.11
"Ross are you packing another bowl?" Tom questioned as Ross sat back up.12
"You know I was thinking about it," he said giving Joe a curios glance. 13
Joe sat up, which in turn caused Shannon to rise as well. 14
"I'm game," Joe said pulling a colorful Jar out from his pants and flipping it open.15
Joe pulled a fairly large nug of green material that seemed to be woven into each other. He broke it up elegantly, letting the smaller piece's return to the jar. With the larger piece's he filled the end of a small glass pipe.16
"Shall we," he said offering it to Tom.17
Tom bowed while taking the colorful glass and lighter. The lighter sparked, the butane lighting in a small explosion which was then sucked into the green material. It fast lit allowing Tom to pull the lighter away quickly and inhale deeply. The smoke burned his throat, filling his lungs and releasing the oh so wonderful THC into his system. Like a majestic dance the bowl passed between them, releasing wild amounts of smoke the twisted and became deformed in the wind. Tom sat up against a tree as the worldly body he was bound to fell apart. His entire consciousness drifted with the smoke, twisting and deforming in the wind. Ross put out his hand, Tom's physical body took it, sending the feeling to every nerve in his body which flared with happiness. 18
"Ready to go," Ross asked Tom pulling him a little closer to his physical body.19
Tom stumbled through the woods, catching himself on a tree or even Ross occasionally. The world seemed to have left, given up and shone light on a new one. 20
"Ross!" Tom screamed continually until Ross turned around gritting his teeth.21
"What?" He replied.22
"I'm fucking baked," said Tom looking at Shannon.23
He tilted his head moving his hand to see her more clearly, around her like a fishnet cloak, there was a strange haze that pulsed and changed colors as Shannon talked. 24
"Shannon, your glowing," Tom said aimlessly trying to touch the haze. 25
"You might be seeing my Ora," she said looking at Tom with a distant yet cute smile. "It's the energy field that all living things have, it shows you there moods and energy."26
Tom looked around spinning in the field they had entered. He watched as geese flew by seeing as there ora's changed quickly. He looked at the ground to see a red haze, a powerful red haze that blazed from the surface of the planet. 27
"Shannon what does red mean," said tom nearly running in to a rock while watching the ground as if it were to run away.28
"Anger, passion, sometimes even romance and love," she said kissing Joe on the cheek.29
"Shannon the Earth is angry at us," Tom said almost frantic.30
"The Earth hates us," Shannon said very bluntly. "We drill into it, eat way it's resource's, and giving nothing back."31
Tom looked at a passing car almost disappointed, He suddenly fell to the ground embracing it as best he could.32
"Sorry if I ever hurt you Earth," he said standing up and brushing some dirt off of his shirt.
Author notes
This is well yeah as it say this is "Personal" guess who Tom is...
Is it good?
Comments
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Uniquely GOOD!!!
WOW, you are one creative writer. You pulled me in right away. Smmmmooth beginning and i love it. And the best part of this is the oddity of the story, yet creative in its way.

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i love this. it has great description and emotion in it. i think i know everyone who is in the story also, so that's cool. grammar and spelling could be better, but hey, it is a work in progress. great write, and keep on going with it.


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This is funny, lol. I liked it. I thought it was hilarious when Tom started hugging the Earth and apologising to it. Umm, minor grammatical errors, which I am sure you will be able to sort when you proof read this. But, yeah, it's good, vivid description. Well Done! Kais =)


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funny
I think the title is funny lol. but not in a bad way. keep writing!

beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Ahahahahaha, I love the title. You wouldn't happen to be a /b/tard, would you? (If so, screw rules 1 and 2.) Anyway, this was a really great story. It is pretty personal, but it's always intrigued me to read about people doing drugs. I love how THC was "released into his system".
Keep it up.
-Keasbey
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